Reviews for The Overlooked Prodigy
Yummybuns chapter 29 . 4/20
Please continue
Yummybuns chapter 1 . 4/20
To the person who said this was shit then tough luck. THIS IS A FAN FICTION YOU FUCKING IMBECILE IF YOUR SO STUCK UP ON THE CANON STUFF THEN JUST GO FUCKING WATCH THE SHOW INSTEAD YOU DAFT TWAT. How many people are so fucking stupid to understand that this is a FanFiction and that the author can do whatever the fuck they want. So kindly go fuck yourself KrSNa382 and stop being such a uptight cunt and go cry
MASK3D-B4TT4LION chapter 3 . 4/15
Ino dont insult naruto
Uzamaki Uchiha chapter 22 . 4/10
Good story so far but just because you take hiraishin out of minato arsenal doesn’t make it to where he can’t combat the 2 hokages and orichimaru and lose his arm he too good of a shinobi for that to happen in my opinion hiraishin is just his trump card but he is the 4th hokage he would obviously be able to adjust in battle and hold his own until hiruzen got there
KrSNa382 chapter 1 . 4/10
you ruined the story with this namikaze clan bullshit
it doesn't exist
and dont get me started on the namikaze with sharingan stuff.
you should have done a little research
your writing was not bad. You should have got your facts straight about the uchiha and sharingan
and the intense training for mangekyou BS defeated the whole point of getting a mangekyou (an uchiha way to mourn someone's death)
you deliberately made it so that naruto can get the mangekyou without any character dying.
there was a way to make this all work but you just added a bunch of headcannons and destroyed the balance
Guest chapter 11 . 4/2
You made naruto too forgiving he experienced years of trauma and it ends with just I'm sorry you could've of done better than that
J9P4 chapter 1 . 3/7
aedwards179 yeah everyone's does tho itachi and sasuke both have amataratsu madaras is time manipulation or something like that I think
Aedwards179 chapter 12 . 3/2
just needing someone with senju and Uchiha blood to get the rinmegan is kinda stupid. one clan could just kidnap a woman from the other and create rinmegan users. I like the anime explanation better where it's only the people who were indra and asuras reincarnations that could get it if they had both chakras.
Aedwards179 chapter 9 . 3/2
oh kamui. isn't everybody's mangekyou supposed to have unique abilities? other than susanoo izanami and izanagi everyone has their own special technique. Madaras is unknown. obitos is kamui, Itachi's is Tsukyomi, shisui is that genjutsu and Sasuke's is Amatarsu
anonimun chapter 1 . 2/19
se que probablemente esto va a ser ignorado pero de todas formas quiero dejarlo para quien se digne de leerlo en cap. 1 hay una parteen donde Biwako esposa de Hiruzen dice la frase hombres, esto es algo que pienso en si es demasiado generalizado o el cuando ponen a a mujer furiosa y hacen que todos tiemblen de miedo cuando los hombres a veces son los hombres mas fueres de las naciones, pero todavía tiemblan, aunque se que es para agrefar comedia a la escena simplemente no me parece o como en el ejemplo conceptualizan y Biwako dice Hombres.

Gracias por leerlo
PsychoStorys chapter 1 . 2/20
fucker you haven't updated this since 2015... Please update this is such a good story
HyperA2019 chapter 1 . 2/5
Looking forward to Chapter 30.
Guest chapter 29 . 1/27
Aye I’m lovein the story can’t wait for the next
J9P4 chapter 18 . 1/28
Why doesn't kakashi know what kamui is he litteraly uses it does he not because kakashi got mangekyo when he killed rin
benten-100 chapter 11 . 1/15
I'm not trying to be rude or anything, but I am getting really sick of you always using the words as well
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