Reviews for The Overlooked Prodigy |
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![]() ![]() i nees more |
![]() ![]() Fk this trash you fking hypocrite. If your mom did that and your sibling did that to u, you think u can just dust it off?! Dumb B*tch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() /Please/ continue! I would love to read and find out what happens next! :D |
![]() ![]() why you have to give naruto friends he shouldent have any |
![]() ![]() ![]() 3 years and still waiting on an update plz don't abandon this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story but maybe get a beta, it looks like you are missing words in some places and miss ordering them in others. That's the only issue though the character building is top notch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story hopefully you’ll find the time to update again and soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() "A real ninja is one that protects everyone" I think you are confusing ninja with samurai... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this fic is awesome i cant wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story's not bad, but I think it could use more originality rather than the close rewrite of the original story. Also, it needs be thought out better sometimes, such as Naruto giving Zabuza his sword. I know Zabuza borrowed a kunai (from Kakashi?) in canon, but I feel it was very unlikely for Naruto to hand his sword over to Zabuza just like that, as it was something precious to him from Shisui - aspecially when he didn't have a very good grasp of the situation at the time and obviously didn't trust Zabuza. It may look "cooler," but it just didn't make sense. A common kunai maybe, but a precious personal item - not likely. However, it's obvious that you put lots of work into the story, so keep writing, you'll no doubt get better! |
![]() ![]() If you stopped writing it could you at least tell us please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you going to make more? |
![]() ![]() Aayyeeeeee! Moreeee! Hahahahaha! I finished 29 chapters in a single day! |
![]() ![]() I thought you were doing well with this story but all things must come to an end. During the first dozen chapters you manage d to make Naruto balanced but after reading the fight between aoi, akane, and chojuro I decided to stop reading due to the fact that Naruto seems more like a Gary stue. With everything you,ve given him he almost has no equals except for someone with the famed sharingan. And so I must bid this story adeu, good luck with your writing |
![]() ![]() This kinda reminds me of the The Uchiha Prodigy story |