|Reviews for The Accidental Arrival of Lauren Harris|
| FindingStories chapter 44 . 1/16
Finally I've reached the end. u have no idea how I wanted to read the ending ages ago but my country blocked this site. i had to use other measures to get this site working. but it was a lovely ending. thank you so much 3
| o0SapphireMyst0o chapter 19 . 1/14
I quite enjoyed this chapter, from meeting the Hobbits to the soar with Lauren and Adam.
I have to say that your grasp of characters is really good. I have no problem believing that it's them :)
Thank you for this chapter! :D
| o0SapphireMyst0o chapter 18 . 1/14
Yes, Legoland is a nice person. Glad things generally went well on her journey there.
Thank you for this chapter )
| o0SapphireMyst0o chapter 17 . 1/13
Well, Legolas made his attempts blatantly obvious. I don't think even those who aren't paying much attention would not notice X)
Lauren needs to be careful though, with what she says.
I hope they get out soon, or at least Lauren.
Thank you for this chapter :)
| o0SapphireMyst0o chapter 16 . 1/13
Bad King Thranduil! Don't make Legolas do that! It hardly turns out well when that happens. Results in hurt feelings, arguments... Unless Lauren catches it quickly.
Thank you for this chapter :3
| o0SapphireMyst0o chapter 15 . 1/13
Not an extremely eventful chapter, but flowed quite well.
I did like the private meeting though, that was amusing. I like Lauren's fire X)
Thank you for this chapter :3
| o0SapphireMyst0o chapter 14 . 1/13
There he is! Glad to have him in the story now :)
You know, I actually watched the second Hobbit movie yesterday just to have Mirkwood and the way too pretty/slightly scary elf king fresh in my mind X) I don't mind the pretty elves. I like pretty elves X) -cough-
Anyways, I was relieved that Haldir had caught up to them at the beginning. It would have been too sad if they left and there was no goodbye. When I think of the eventual future of this story though, I can't help but feel sad for Haldir :(
Thank you for this well written chapter, I enjoyed it :)
| o0SapphireMyst0o chapter 13 . 1/12
Well that was not how I expected the chapter to end, but it makes sense. Poor Lauren and Haldir :(
If it were me, I probably would have started to cry the moment I thought of the implications of the relationship, before the conversation stared after the kiss. Emotional me.
I did find the part where Arisinya huffed away after Lauren played the violin to be rather amusing X)
Thank you for this wonderfully written chapter :)
| o0SapphireMyst0o chapter 12 . 1/11
I think Lauren is turning into an elf! But 'how' is what I want to know.
Very good chapter, thank you :)
| o0SapphireMyst0o chapter 11 . 1/11
And there it is. Come on Haldir, go talk to her! She's leaving soon!
Thank you for the lovely chapter :3
| o0SapphireMyst0o chapter 10 . 1/11
Poor Haldir, he's hurt...
Sounds like we're going on an adventure soon though and soon to meet Legolas :)
Very good chapter, thank you :3
| o0SapphireMyst0o chapter 9 . 1/11
Awww! How lovely! :3
I really enjoyed the last part with Lauren and Haldir dancing, so sweet ~
I really like this chapter, it was written well. Thank you :)
| o0SapphireMyst0o chapter 8 . 1/10
I knew it. I knew there was something going on. Truthfully, I didn't see Haldirs name next to the Legolas, OC pairing at the top until you mention at the beginning of this chapter.
I'm looking forward to this festival of flowers! :D
Good chapter, thank you :3
| o0SapphireMyst0o chapter 7 . 1/9
Wow, five months sure went by fast. Glad he agreed to train her though. I'm sure it will come in handy.
Good chapter, thank you :)
| o0SapphireMyst0o chapter 6 . 1/9
I guess that makes sense that he wouldn't recover. Very sad though :(
Good that Haldir was there for her.
I also think the name of the chapter fits well.
Thank you for this well written chapter :)