Reviews for Fractured
Anonoodles chapter 6 . 1/13/2016
You sure stuck my heart with feels! I love your Elsa and for being so short the world and characters were still really well developed. Definitely a favorite story. I especially like the ending because it ends happily but still sweetly and the reader can extrapolate from there.
OTAKU YUMIKURI chapter 6 . 8/24/2014
Amazing chapter awesome work keep it up
Invader Johnny chapter 6 . 8/24/2014
Elsa's happiness is because of Anna, it took her so long to figure that one out but in the end, it didn't matter how long it took her to be happy, what matters is that she is as you wrote "whole".

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Hephzi - Ruler of the world chapter 6 . 8/24/2014
D'awww! :3
Loridhhp chapter 6 . 8/24/2014
Aw! Great ending to a great story. :) Lots of warm fuzzy feels.
OTAKU YUMIKURI chapter 5 . 8/21/2014
Epic chapter loved it
Invader Johnny chapter 5 . 8/21/2014
Anna certainly has wormed her way into Elsa's heart, get heh heh.

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Loridhhp chapter 5 . 8/21/2014
Excellent chapter! So emotional and well written. I feel so bad for Elsa and her loneliness. :( And now She's injured! Poor Elsa! I can't wait for more. :)
KeiFujino chapter 5 . 8/21/2014
Very good story! Pleassee update sooon! _
Hephzi - Ruler of the world chapter 5 . 8/21/2014
Hephzi - Ruler of the world chapter 4 . 7/23/2014
Loridhhp chapter 4 . 7/4/2014
Cute moments with the picnic with Anna and Elsa. It's so nice that Elsa is opening up to trust Anna. Unfortunately, now Kristoff is sending a party to find the 'creature' to kill it, despite Anna's insistence that SHE is harmless. And now Hans is heading out after poor Elsa! Oh boy. I can't wait for more. Great chapter.
Invader Johnny chapter 4 . 7/4/2014
Elsa has so many people after her, wow, how will Anna be able to help or protect Elsa now?

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AvidReader88 chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
I'm very intrigued by this story, I hope to see how everything turns out in the future!
Good Job! I excitedly await your next update.
WolfGurlBlue chapter 3 . 4/7/2014
keep it p chica :)
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