|Reviews for Pokemon Adventures:LeafGreen|
| TheDivines chapter 4 . 6/10/2014
I would say charmander is my favorite starter cause Charizard rules, Jolteon is my favorite Eveelution in gen 1, and I prefer pudgy over spearow. Good story so far I love anything with Leaf. Will you possibly put in the fact that Leaf may have killed Gary's Raticate after the S.S. Anne battle? If you don't know about it just look it up. And the remake for gen 3 will be awesome now they just need to remake Diamond Pearl and Platinum.
| N-Badger97 chapter 4 . 6/8/2014
I have been waiting for this story to update for so long, i'm so glad you did! Yes I have heard of the new gen 3 remakes and I'm stoked! On to the review. I see you had Leaf catch a Spearow, that's pretty cool cause most people choose pidgey over spearow. I also liked the nod to the anime with the whole spearow attacking Pikachu thing. I was also pleased to see Leaf let Pikachu go because she didn't have a true fight with that a hint that we will be seeing him again? One thing I think you should work on is how the wording in your story flows. I suggest you re read your chapters to see if they flow properly. Other than that I really enjoyed this chapter, I can't wait for the next one!
| Gladius52 chapter 4 . 6/8/2014
My favorite would be a pidgey, no contest in this type category in the kanto region. Also your battles scenes are superb good and focused. Keep it up.
| razmacka chapter 4 . 6/8/2014
Mine would be spearow and also, when you said no pairings YET can you choose burningleaf shipping? Red X Leaf, awesome story, now a favourite and following :)
| razmacka chapter 3 . 6/8/2014
Mine would be jolteon :)
| razmacka chapter 2 . 6/8/2014
Probably charmander, also awesome story :)
| Coli Chibi chapter 2 . 4/3/2014
Not a bad start, but the pacing grammar could use a bit of work.
Choosing my favorite Kanto starter is like choosing my favorite flavor of ice cream: impossible! I'll say Squirtle for the sake of giving you an actual answer, though. :D
| Sakura Touko chapter 3 . 4/3/2014
Mine is Eevee, since it is, I like me very much the chapter, there became I very tender, I wait with anxieties for the close chapter, it is still like that
| N-Badger97 chapter 3 . 4/3/2014
I really liked this chapter (I think red has a little crush on Leaf!). I especially liked the light hearted goodbyes and the set up to the journey.
| Sakura Touko chapter 2 . 3/27/2014
Brilliant, fantastic and I have to say it I am charmed with the three, it is difficult to choose one, I wait with anxieties for the near chapter, it is still like that
| N-Badger97 chapter 2 . 3/27/2014
Very well written story, I look forward to future chapters. I do think the chapters are kind of short, you should try expanding them a little unless the chapters are short for a specific reason, then please disregard this suggestion. Other than that keep up the good work.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
Nice beginning. Please update soon
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| Sakura Touko chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
It is very interesting, I expect to know more of this fanfic, till then, we meet