Reviews for RUN!
clarevic1986 chapter 11 . 4/18
NOOOOOO! Why did you stop this story just as it was getting to them working out their problems!? Such a let down!
B chapter 11 . 3/21
Bianca chapter 11 . 3/21
Please finish this. I am in love with the story and am very sad there is no more to read. PLEASE FIND YOUR MUSE AND CONTINUE. I HAVE LITERALLY SPENT ALL DAY READING IT AND I AM HOOKED. Great writing and ideas. Ignore the negative comments, to all the negatives, why the fuck are you reading this if you're gonna point out what you don't like. P.S GREAT STORY AND NEEDS TO BE FINISHED.
Guest chapter 11 . 12/17/2014
Your story is great. You really should finish it
JN-Runner chapter 11 . 11/25/2014
I just found your story.. and you got a great story started here. I hope you continue it... looking forward to reading the next chapter...JN
Guest chapter 11 . 11/11/2014
i love this story, i can't wait to read more. Please update soon!
Rosetta11 chapter 11 . 11/8/2014
Please update soon! this is a great story! XXX
DottiG chapter 11 . 10/22/2014
I am missing this story hope you come back to it soon.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
So is your muse gone? Almost 2 months since yoir last updated. So many unfinished stories out there because if it doesn't fit how the readers think how it should be, then all the negative reviews start then the writer gives up on it. I like your version. I think the same about Christian and I also feel Ana needs to be a stronger character. She was awful in the books, let Christian manipulate her with sex and punishment. I'm glad you've written Ana stonger and can stand up for herself. Just hoping that all the negatives haven't turned you off. Please come back and play out your story.
emm74 chapter 11 . 10/1/2014
Please update!
Christine Wood chapter 11 . 9/30/2014
love the story have you lost it and not updating it anymore?
Guest chapter 11 . 9/19/2014
Great story I don't think you should listen to those negatives ..
I like the touch with flowers ! Well Ana knows he would of had people chasing her ..
And of cause the part where Ana ran to his arms all she was worried about he wouldn't hit her again when Ana saw his tears she knew he was saying it from the heart ! Her heart took over .. Great story
Can't wait for next part bxx
Guest chapter 11 . 8/31/2014
Justttt wanted to point out that Christian and Elliot aren't related by blood so everyone's battling water here.
Jean444 chapter 11 . 8/27/2014
Oh no! Looks like my premonition came true, readeRs complained. Hope it was just a few. Just ignore them. Hahaha. Jean
Jean444 chapter 10 . 8/27/2014
OMG this is so excellent. I hate that i am almost to the end of what you have completed thus far. Your writing is so professional and your story line is completely unique from any of the other FSOG stories i've read. How do you know so much about construction? Thanks. I just hope you don't get any negative reviews that make you abandon this. Thanks so much! Jean
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