|Reviews for Guardian|
| FanfictionalRatt chapter 2 . 3/20/2014
This seems like a good story, it's pretty well written and executed.
But I think you should have posted this in the Portal-stories only section, not as a Half-LifePortal crossover. It's out of place here, unless you're going to add some Half-Life characters, which seems unlikely with the direction of this story.