Reviews for How Little Yellow Book Should Have Ended
platypusgirl27 chapter 1 . 8/9
I love this! This should have been the actual ending! Its so good!
LionGoesMeow1 chapter 1 . 4/21
Jason2014 chapter 1 . 4/13
wow what a great chapter id love to see that happen in the cartoon
GiovanniGo chapter 1 . 2/5
I do too...but the real episode isn't that bad to me! I watched it and I don't inmate it like most kids. I don't go around reading other diaries!'s just a kids show.
JeremyX chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
Wildstar93 chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
I read it, and I liked it a lot. THAT should've been the ending to Little Yellow Book, and that'd be when they apologize, forgive, and become friends. I really like that. :)

And I saw that you read my stories. I'm really glad you like them.

Keep up the awesome work!
JayZeeTee16 chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
YES! This ending is perfect! So much better than the actual episode itself. And for times when Spongebob acts like that Squidward is because all he wanted is to spend some time with him, even though some cases were caused by something else. Great ending by the way!
grandvizier527 chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
This needs to happen in an episode. But that would be character development, which wouldn't have worked in the show before or after the movie.

Comparing "old" and "new" SpongeBob is interesting. Fans are sometimes asking themselves, "Do we hate new spongebob because we've outgrown him, or is it because he's genuinely crappier?" I think it may be a combination of both, but episodes like these (I saw this one) really indicate that it's more of the latter. There are, however, a few good episodes. I was okay with the Krusty Towers episode (in which Mr. Krabs turns the Krusty Krab into a hotel) because it had a similar vibe to it. Squidward did suffer a bit (what Mr. Enter calls Squidward torture porn) but I don't think he ever actually had any physical pain that we got to see. It wasn't as good as the classics, of course, but it wasn't horrible.

I'd like to see Mr. Enter's review of that episode, too. He's pretty good at what he does. The only thing I don't like about him is that he doesn't seem to care about alienating a non-brony audience. Basically he's a brony and I am not, and his constant pony references don't mean anything to me. I didn't come for your MLP reviews, I came for your animated atrocities!

Another thing I've noticed is that he never goes into much detail on his admirable animation stuff. He usually just gives a plot summary and that's it, with a few exceptions. I'd like him to explain to us the audience WHY he thinks this or that is great. Sometimes going through the plot alone won't suffice.
Emily E chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
Meh. Not really my best work (or at least one I'm most proud of). I think I could've eased up on the drama a little, but I wanted to try to make the story interesting. Maybe this could be a thing in the future. Rewriting the second halves of episodes to make them more dramatic.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
I guess this is okay, not bad but needs some work. But do you think you could make a alternate ending for Gramma's Kisses? That episode, I hate. Squidward and the customers were such bullies. They were never punished and Squidward should have been given the same treatment as Mama Krabs did to Mr Krabs.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
Terrible, I think Squidward deserved all of that. He's too mean
SweetMoonFruit chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
This made me smile so much! This was just sooo much better than the atual episode :D Great job!