Godcatfucking damn it, Shevchenko.
You have lost all the respect I had for you, which is a really fucking impressive feat.

Bruh, those Equalizers would literally rip themselves apart. Every heard of Newton's Third Law? Considering that the ships have essentially no armor, the backwards force from the slug fired would easily RIP THE GUN RIGHT OFF THE SHIP, SINCE IT'S A FREAKING DREADNOUGHT GUN.
Also, humans? Without fighters? That's funny, man. Really funny.
Fighters would ez curbstomp those Equalizers. Too tired to say anything else about this, and I shouldn't have to.
Also, wanking human stupidity a bit much. Not too much, but there's a point where enemy stupidity becomes plot armor.
other than that, very good story.

This is pretty alright.. however having Exalt is completely unnecessary. Other than adding some internal conflict for the humans it adds nothing to the actual plot. It is uninteresting and somewhat annoying actually, not even worth as a side plot. You should have left them out after the introductory history.

Why does they care about the element zero dust? Even if the iconoclast isn't made to filter toxins either their armor they're wearing underneath it or the iconoclast armor itself is a seal environment with it own air supply, otherwise they would have just died in space on the trip over. What, did they take their helmets off once aboard or for some reason unsealed their suit? Seems like an oversight to me.

FUCKING RETARD

please try to format your story in smaller chapters, these are 25 000 words each and it's almost impossible to read correctly because of that.

Hope this story isn’t dead keep up the good work.

Shitfic. Fuck that asari cuntrag.

Amazing story, can’t wait for an update

thank you for a great read wherever life finds you now i hope you know there are people who still enjoy what parts of your creativity you share with us via your stories. thank you for your time and patience!

A good story! Too bad this seems to be dead considering it hasn't been updated in 4 years

I don't understand why the Annihilation was wasting it's strongest attack, a 3-kilometer long fusion lace, on cruisers instead of the dreadnoughts or even the Destiny Ascension.

Dud it's ok, embrace the bro side of the force, chillax man, I get it, you were beszy bro, this is supposed to be fun maaan, the power of the bro Side of the force compels you braaw.

How quickly it turned to shit...simply amazing.

Right. The Shepard's story. And what an original story it would have been, something no one has ever written before...ever...