Reviews for The Technological Assimilators
swordworks chapter 5 . 3/11
again all this softness is irritating me . ch.5
swordworks chapter 4 . 3/11
In chapter 4 I only disliked that the soldier allowed Trevos to escape and did not kill them all instead.
SeverlyLate chapter 5 . 11/12/2016
Well, it was good for a while... But the last two chapters are an ugly mess. You probably was trying to picture a mess, but the result is messy. It, s a question of personal perception of course by i bailed mid 5th chapter. No sense to read further.
Cayar chapter 5 . 9/16/2016
Well, it's been a year. Do you still wish to continue?
Cayar chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
*Hierarchy
Ooo, this looks promising. Let's read a little further, precious...
Shadow of a Memory chapter 2 . 6/27/2016
This piece is simply amazing. I don't know what else to say other than I love it and it's freaking epic.
Chris Adair chapter 5 . 5/31/2016
Awesome. More please.
Natzi Sumbitch chapter 5 . 5/13/2016
So... it's been over a year since your last update... you still alive? *Pokes body*
Artikuno chapter 5 . 5/13/2016
Update?
This is nice, keep it up!
ManwithaPlan113 chapter 5 . 3/19/2016
Hope you do what works for you best my friend, for this is an amazing work of art, however short and incomplete, and I wish you luck
Goodpie2 chapter 2 . 2/3/2016
Meh. The tactics presented here... Ugh. And you have a tendency to switch between past and present tense without reason.
SaintMichael95 chapter 3 . 1/19/2016
Ummm you literally just reuploaded the last chapter... Or at least it seems that way...
norn328 chapter 2 . 1/10/2016
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DarkWalkerWolf chapter 2 . 12/15/2015
Is it me or there is gap betveen chapters? I remember that there was the first fight and then so much talking.
Nagato wannabe chapter 1 . 12/1/2015
interesting...
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