|Reviews for On Each Other's Teams|
| nklewisgmail.com chapter 15 . 9/16
I am DEVASTATED that this is over. I really love the characters you created. This is a wonderful story- great pacing, strong motivations, just enough tension to propel the story forward, and a fleshed-out backstory without overstated exposition. You’re a real writer. Thank you for sharing your gift!
| nklewisgmail.com chapter 13 . 9/16
Oh my God. This story is kicking the crap out of my heart.
| ArrogantSlytherin chapter 15 . 7/2
Hands down the best thing I've read all week. We'll ignore the fact that it's Monday and take the sentiment as it's intended, yeah?
| Guest chapter 15 . 4/29
This was an amazing 15 chapters! Loved every second of it. I think what I liked most was that Jane retained her independence despite having been drawn in by either guy. Excellent read.
| trontroy chapter 15 . 4/10
Really enjoyed this, quite a rollercoaster ride filled with emotions cos it’s funny and sad at the same time. Pls
Continue writing Thor fanfics!
| grlash chapter 15 . 2/16
I love your work. Sad to see the story end and know a sequel if any would be just as good. Thank you for sharing!
| ashreena chapter 1 . 1/7
jane was a bit of a whore. Sleeping with both brothers in the same day, yes I know it's taboo. should have chosen one not both. now she has just her memories
| Monday the 14th chapter 15 . 11/7/2017
This was beyond awesome! Thank you so much for sharing it with us .
| songsaboutsleep chapter 15 . 11/2/2017
this is devastatingly sexy
| Lillihope chapter 15 . 5/4/2017
I absolutely loved and adored and enjoyed and every possible positive word this story. It was really well written and done, and I like the open but resolved ending and even the conflict with Thor and cheating. Thanks so much for spending your time to write this story that I was able to enjoy 3 much love
| KyloRen'sgirl213 chapter 1 . 2/25/2017
This is new look good to read
| EreshkigalGirl chapter 15 . 7/1/2016
Wow...this was amazing. I can't believe you call this drabble-style, because it was amazing. Loki is so twisted, but oddly vulnerable. He reminds me of Gareth the Goblin King in that way. Or Severus Snape. (Clearly I have a type.) Anyway yeah, fantastic story here; very modernist in its amoral themes and lack of traditional resolution.
| Sudoku.Music.Banana chapter 15 . 3/29/2016
Twisted, & it got dark/deep/real/something towards the end after starting out so light and hysterical. Thanks for writing & posting!
| Sudoku.Music.Banana chapter 6 . 3/29/2016
Definitely just typed every phrase into Google Translate, only to make it to end where you wrote it out for us. Greatly enjoying this AU, will write another review on the last chap :)
| OfTheOcean chapter 15 . 5/10/2015
Oh, wow. This was incredible. Loki was just so evil!
Please tell me there's a sequel. But if there isn't, the end was good enough for me to live with that.