|Reviews for So Into You|
| Forgot my loggin chapter 16 . 2/12
Bro, these CU assholes is just dumb... i suggest you only post smuts on ao3 for safety. Otherwise you're cool.
| Shadowglyder chapter 11 . 2/3
Why wouldn't Elsa have told Anna about the cider before leaving the restroom?
| Drakenskar chapter 15 . 1/29
To the author, I apologize for posting this on your reviews. However, I do recommend posting a warning for smut in either the story description or in an authors note.
Addressing to the people who label themselves as "critics United", I have some **constructive criticism** for you. I suggest you guys look up the definition of criticism and reviews. What you are doing is not criticism, but bullying and harassing the author. It's okay to share your opinions or thoughts, but if the author chooses not to listen or do as you say, the mature thing to do is to just drop it. You cannot control another person's actions, but you can control YOUR actions. You did bring to her attention that you think she should tone down her work. If she decides not to, the simple and mature solution is to just not read it and find another story. Do not bully the author.
Second, I would recommend picking up a paper back book from the library or book store. Read a romance book that is written for teens (sometimes labeled as young adults) and then read one that's for adult ( and I do not mean 50 shades of gray). You will notice that it is not unusual for a book written for adults to contain detailed smut. It is not surprising to find smut in an M rated story. If you do not want to read smut, read something that is rated for young adults (or as its labeled here - Teens). Also take note, this site is for 13. This includes adults.
Know your stuff before you go around lecturing people and leave the policing to the employees of fan fiction. Report something if you feel it's necessary, but don't be a jerk.
I hope that you take all this into consideration in the future and avoid the possibility of hurting someone.
| Question42 chapter 15 . 1/29
As you have been told, the explicit sexual content of this story exceeds what is allowed on this site. Please consider moving your story to a more permissive site.
| Kyoko-nyaa chapter 16 . 1/28
hahahaha. Glob! Anna's surprise is a strap-on. I'm excited to read the next chapter. XD and welcome back!
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/28
Oh Please continue with there smut
| TheSnowQueenElsaOfArendelle chapter 16 . 1/28
WTF? What happened? You were suppose to upload chapter 17, right? What stopped you?... Did you just delete it 'cause you thought it wasn't good enough?
| ridesisapis chapter 17 . 1/28
Your story has crossed into MA territory which isn't allowed by this site. Your previous chapters will need to be edited and toned down. You could post uncensored chapters on Wattpad or AO3 and direct your readers there if you wish.
Non-story entries, such as this, are also not allowed under the site rules and guidelines.
-ridesisapis of Critics United
| Justherefortheride chapter 17 . 1/28
Damn, I got excited when it was updated.
It's alright, we have time. Is there a time frame?
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/28
how come there has not been an update in a while
| A'Svstheworld chapter 16 . 1/12
oh ho ho ho Anna you :x hahaha nice chapter I wonder of what kind is Anna's surprise hahaha :z I'll be waiting for the next chapter so please update soon!
| GTAMGSFAN chapter 1 . 12/20/2014
I have just one pet peeve about this story, since their parents were killed in an unfortunate accident they would be placed in the care of a living relative or some type of legal guardian, Kai and/or Gerda are an excellent choice for this purpose, very seldom are siblings chosen as a guardian for their younger siblings, just saying. Great story though so far, keep up the good work.
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/11/2014
Please update this more it's an amazing story
| Nathalie7 chapter 16 . 11/29/2014
where would a minor get access to a sex toy? Why would Anna have brought a sex toy with her? Anna doesn't seem like the type that would have already been sexually active and neither does Elsa...so it seem OOC from what you have built up in the first half of the story to Anna start eating Elsa out like a pro...then out of the blue has a strap on and speaking like a porn star. Maybe one of them had an accident the first day at the water park and this whole thing at this fast pace is an erotic dream?
Thanks for sharing your story with us...
| Nathalie7 chapter 15 . 11/29/2014
Belle, Belle, Belle...whatcha up to now sneaky girl?