Reviews for Eighteen Again
Piletorn chapter 22 . 4/28/2023
Thank you for writing this. My only complaint is that it isn’t longer xD
Piletorn chapter 18 . 4/27/2023
Lemon isn’t usually my thing if I have to be entirely honest (which is amusing to me because I love lemons and I really enjoy RL lemon).. maybe it’s about timing, maybe it’s about buildup, or just maybe, it’s about most Lemon simply not being written Well.. for once I’m happy to report that I enjoyed it.. it seemed realistic (all of it could be or has been done by myself at one point), I could feel myself connecting to it and it did shake up a few butterflies in my stomach. So it would be a lie to claim this was poorly written.

I don’t usually write reviews mid story as I prefer to read complete stories and give my review at the end, however I felt that this lemon needed to be recognized
HadesVampire chapter 22 . 4/15/2023
ahh! I loved this. start to finish. I loved watching Minerva learn who Mary was. I loved seeing her as both Professor and 18 yr old Minerva. the contrast was beautiful and brilliant.

I loved seeing 2 of the smartest witches of their ages, develop a friendship with each other, and with an understanding of what it is like to be outcast bc of their intelligence. and the realization that they wouldn't have that in each other. watching that realization, was so so beautiful. I loved watching them learn how to read each other. how driven they were to protect and care for the other. I loved Minerva's brother! and I love how Harry was the brother Hermione always needed in this.

absolutely beautiful and phenomenal work.
Alice Griffin chapter 8 . 3/27/2023
"Miss. Granger—In sixty-five years, I have never managed to find another person who could match me in ambition, intelligence, or spontaneity. There wasn't a single person who managed to keep me entertained or interested. Until you."
This is a beautifully written romantic scene! Thank you!
moaning-myrtl3 chapter 22 . 1/17/2023
I think the ending might’ve been a bit abrupt and a chapter of them reconciling before the epilogue would’ve been better. Overall, this story was great! Can’t wait to read your other stories
Mvincent chapter 22 . 11/28/2022
Amazing! Just simply amazing!
Anitaxp chapter 22 . 11/24/2022
This was a good find! I honestly didn’t think I was going to like it that much since the pairing seemed odd but your story convinced me! Thank you for sharing
rssantos72 chapter 22 . 3/9/2022
I LOVED
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2021
Do you have any plans to write a follow up to this story? I also enjoyed the story.
BellaBerry12 chapter 1 . 7/18/2021
I'm already in love with this xD
MsSchneeheide chapter 12 . 4/30/2021
Lavender's bad week was pretty fun to read about, and well deserved! Lesson learned, hopefully.
And Malcolm is great! Very likeable. (Btw, in the sentence "Robert stayed far" you wrote Robert instead of Malcolm... and since I'm on this, in many chapters there are odd spellings for Weasley and Parvati - sorry it's a mania of mine hehe)
MsSchneeheide chapter 11 . 4/30/2021
...awwwww! Solo fluffy :) love it
Forgot to mention, a couple of chapters back: I got the impression Hermione's parents are alive, but from an earlier chapter I'd understood they were not... So what is it?
MsSchneeheide chapter 10 . 4/30/2021
Albus and Minerva's old/new friendship makes me smile. But I can't help feeling that the situation has been handled quite poorly by the 'grown-ups' here, Minerva included. Not consulting over the holidays? Going back/letting her back on the train? Mh.
The articles were great! Both the supportive one and the trashy one, perfect and fun.
Fred and George can be disruptively fun and at the same surprisingly considerate.
Neville and Ginny? That's an idea! And what about Harry, would you pair him off with Luna here or something?
Finally, Ron. I fear he will do something stupid sooner or later.
MsSchneeheide chapter 9 . 4/29/2021
Poor Minerva! This is fairly catastrophic. Let's see what Dumbledore etc can come up with.
MsSchneeheide chapter 8 . 4/29/2021
Ah, the Weasleys... Of COURSE Molly would know straight away, she's Molly! Pfft. And Fred and George are hilarious, how fun would it be to have one of THEM 'seriously' hitting on Minerva? Ron IS going to feel just... horrified haha! Can see his ears glowing from here, several years and a couple thousand kilometres apart.
Ooh, the cat IS put of the bag. CatS. Multiple ones.
Minerva came out, after such a long time... daunting! She'll feel awfully lighter. And Harry knows? About Hermione's crush, or Mary's, or Minerva? Perhaps all of these. And Hermione and Minerva were basically sitting in a tree here! Or, yk, in a snow covered orchard. Lol.

P.s. I LOVE nargles! Well not nargles yk, who loves nargles... But Luna, and Minerva's reference. :)
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