Reviews for Weight of the World |
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![]() ![]() I like self inserts, although I don't think I've actually read any Naruto ones, I have read a lot of MHA ones though, some of which are very eerie.(heh shadow quirk) also adoptive bro Chisaki. (shudders in terror) |
![]() ![]() Screaming, crying, throwing up. This is so good, all of your work is sublime ! I wish we could see you make a come back but I’m grateful for what you’ve put out regardless |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was very badly done and Naruto was soon useless... Blehhh! |
![]() ![]() Ah yes. Another author who will 'protect the Konoha' for no other reason than 'it is the right thing to do' despite being hated by most of the people there. You are a dumbass that can't use your brain properly. If you were in that kind of position, you'd instantly say 'FAT NO' to saving them. I honestly don't mind the MC staying in Konoha. But for fucks sake, at least put in the effort to make a proper reason. Not this 'it is the right thing to do' BS. If suffering that kind of treatment is the right thing to do then why don't you sell yourself into slavery? I am sure you would really enjoy that. It would be for the greater good too, ya know? Obviously, I am being sarcastic if your brain couldn't pick that up. Alright. I am being a bit too mean. Sorry for that. But you kinda deserve it for writing the MC this way. You could have just said that at the MC's current level, she can't do a shit with her situation. Then make her get some actual friends and then say that's the reason why she does not want to leave Konoha. It would have been an easy fix. Instead, we have this masochist retard who probably gets off on being treated badly since she thinks that she is weak-willed if she wants fair treatment. Ugh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm guessing you probably don't even check this anymore, but I just wanted to say I really enjoyed this fan-fic. You're a great writer! I'll admit I'm really bummed that it was discontinued, but I loved reading what you had, and I hope one day you get back into it! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A true loser through and through |
![]() ![]() ![]() Choji? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd think being reborn as Gaara would be worse. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A bit sad this was discontinued, it was super enjoyable! I'm definitely going to miss this story, this Naruto and her precious people. Thank you so much for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() In fact, I am curious about twin stories and Hinata stories of that kind. Can you advise me on some stories? |
![]() ![]() Nejinaru |
![]() ![]() Pairing please be Nejinaru |
![]() ![]() ![]() Genderbending that adds nothing to the story? Canon rehash? Dropped. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww i totally understand the logic behind placing Sakura in team 8 instead of 7 and she'd probably have a better time for it but it still makes me sad. this SI is definitely among my top ones, the writing is fantastic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tsume-sempia, i understand that you may be busy…but I would also love to read the rest of what you had planned for this! ~Moon-chan |