|Reviews for Spirit|
| cackled chapter 14 . 12/13/2002
that is cruel and unusual punishment...you can't just end a story like that! Now I'm gonna pull all my hair out waiting for the next chapter...can't wait
| mom-mi-oh chapter 14 . 12/10/2002
Hey! An update! And time to read it!
(well, sort of... I'm at work ;) )
Anyways- exciting cliff-hanger, as usual! I like Cassandra's attitude...
Looking forward to more - and Merry Christmas!
| White dragon mistress chapter 14 . 12/8/2002
You love torturing us dont you?
You almost allways end with a cliffhanger
PLEASE WRITE MORE!
| ButterflyGuitar chapter 14 . 12/8/2002
BG: MEEP! Cliffie! :P
Midori: Ooh, it's all coming together. The ending should be most enjoyable.
BG: Quite. This is a really good chapter. The next one should be good as well. Keep writing! _
| Gardeners Grow Love chapter 10 . 12/8/2002
Keep on writing. ) The story is interesting, with a more mature flavour than most involving Yami and Tea. It's quite evident that you have some prior knowledge of Egyptian lifestyle, history and culture, which adds more depth to the story. The writing style is smooth and unhurried as well. I dream of publishing a book someday too; never give up on your writing, even if you have to squeeze each word out.
| yugioh gurl chapter 14 . 12/7/2002
| cackled chapter 13 . 12/4/2002
| White dragon mistress chapter 13 . 12/2/2002
Oh come on ! you evil person :(
please write more soon
the suspence! it pains!
*sigh* dont mind me i'm just acting wierd -
well i expect another chapter soon *hint *hint* *cough* *cough*
| mom-mi-oh chapter 13 . 11/30/2002
Wow! Lots of action here.
I like your use of metaphor (ie. 'bathed in a ghostly nimbus' - very nice, very descriptive). That is also one of my favourite tools...
I look forward to the climax - hurry, hurry! :)
| mom-mi-oh chapter 12 . 11/30/2002
Oooh - I like it! Very exciting!
On to the next chapter!
| n0T1nu53 chapter 13 . 11/30/2002
arrgh! she's dead? she's DEAD? she CAN'T be dead...i hope they manage to complete the rescue...and what WERE they doing with yami anywayz? *confused* btw, shouldn't tea know seto and yami etc from the future? or mebbe they look different...
anywayz, great chapter! update soon! :):)
| ButterflyGuitar chapter 13 . 11/29/2002
BG: O.O NOOOOOO! Poor Tea! I never thought I'd say that...
Midori: O.O Poor Yami! Grrr. Just where is that evil dude? I'll get him!
BG: Uhh, Midori? This isn't your story. You just have to wait and see what happens next time.
Midori: EVIL CLIFFHANGER!
BG: .U It keeps people in suspense. And it makes them want to read more...
Midori: I want to read more!
BG: YamiMommy, this story is developing beautifully! Action, suspense, ooh, I love it! Update again soon, ok? Until then, good bye!
Midori: Don't kill Yami! ;;
| Eva WoLf chapter 13 . 11/28/2002
Omigod! I HATED Tea...i really hated her...but this story cut my hate for her in HALF! Great job! You just did the impossible and made me like Tea-well, not like, but not hate. GREAT STORY! ur a gr8 author n good luck on becoming a publisher! Ja ne~
| White dragon mistress chapter 12 . 11/28/2002
- MORE! MORE! MORE! oh please write soon, please! still abit confusing but good nonetheless
| cackled chapter 12 . 11/27/2002