Reviews for Desire Unleashed
zenshiryuken chapter 1 . 7/18
Make a chapter 2, where Ash has a dream like it.
Kimmytrainer chapter 2 . 5/12
Holy shit that was totally unexpected! I can see why this has so many favorites. Great job.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/4
lol #cynthiaislonleyandashdoesentlikeherxD
Guest chapter 2 . 3/4
#sorrybroitwasadream
donald trump chapter 1 . 12/8/2016
i got so hard
ajhalks7 chapter 2 . 11/27/2016
A Job Well Done I Would Like a Secqual
bruzer chapter 2 . 7/17/2016
That twist thou
Mokkel chapter 2 . 5/29/2016
it seemed kind of angsty at the end but overall it was a good and definitely worth the read
the master of Thanatos chapter 2 . 3/23/2016
good story but u got me with the dream but hay it was a wet dream on the plus side for her
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 2 . 7/17/2015
cool
Flibbly Moonbeam chapter 2 . 3/30/2015
I mean, it was good and all but that ending was fucking awful. I got the 'it was all a dream' ending beaten out of me at PRIMARY SCHOOL.
Mega Latios 1988 chapter 2 . 11/29/2014
Why Why Why! Why Did you write such a beautiful fic just for it to be a dream. One of the best lemons I have read. Can you please do a squel. I bet it would be epic. Anyway see you next time if you ever write a fic on this pairing again
Xerzo LotCN chapter 2 . 9/9/2014
great job you troll a dream really but still write more please make this beome true...!
Rammy chapter 2 . 9/1/2014
awesome story I loved both chapters they were really good and I really hope you update the story:)
jbrew123 chapter 2 . 8/5/2014
Good story but you're a troll
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