Reviews for Fate's Bane |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto: *Pulls out Glock* I may be outta chakra, but not outta options. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So...his already insane healing factor genetically and via Kurama was further enhanced by Avalon; only to be nerfed to the point that it couldn't quickly heal a single stab wound? Even Shirou Emiya survived with ONLY Avalon but it took the same exact process to heal Naruto as Shirou; despite Naruto's insane base healing factor AND Avalon? Utter nonsense. I hope this is explained next chapter, because it looks like you are just forcing Canon events. |
![]() ![]() ![]() First complaint is how long it takes for an update on the story. You are among the top 5 slowest. Second complaint is I don't agree with the option of Morgan/Morgana being a choice for his harem after the stunt with Sakura and what Naruto saw in Modred's and others dream/memory cycles. Maybe if it were a alternative path Morgan Le Fey. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally update, i' am waiting for long time |
![]() ![]() ![]() What's with all the gender bending? Do you have to put it at the end? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really love it man hope to see more soon also if possible can you add in Miyamoto Musashi,Frankenstein,Minamoto no Raikou,Boudica,Kiyohime,Hassan of serenity and Tamamo no mae in Naruto’s harem. Reasons for Tamamo cause Naruto needs a nice kitsune girl to talk to even though he has Kurama it will take time for him to bond with him. Reasons for Frankenstein if you’ve seen her history then you know Naruto needs to help her. Reasons for Kiyohime even though she’s a Yandere all she ever wants was to feel and be loved with the way she hates those that lie and break their promises you can say that Naruto will never break his promise to those around him but thats my opinion. I think thats that but its up to you but still think about anyway good luck man. |
![]() ![]() ![]() MOAR, although now i remember why i don't want to reread this...cuz of the fckng rape that happened to Sakura and the servants, ik it's a Canon event but still... |
![]() ![]() ![]() That omake is hilarious |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for updating this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done! Loved this and again, so glad to have ya back! Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() For the record, stories with ten-plus women for the harem, barely get anywhere, if at all! Well it's just who-what-when-where-how-why, does this or that female move the story forward, you know? The question you must ask yourself is, do you, the author, have what it takes to make an cohesive harem story, involving over five or more women, all vying for the affection's of the lone, single, male, without losing track of what you are writing? If you just wanted Naruto Uzumaki to get in bed with each woman, then you could have just written up, some, multi-chaptered, one-shot vignette's where Naruto, would go through an randomly selected scenario with said lady, then after a couple of affectionate incident's...he'd take said woman to bed, end of story. As stated, mass harem stories barely last for long, because of, who-what-when-where-how-why, do they exist, and what role do they have, that would progress the story forward, you know? So good luck, I guess, but if real life keeps you away from this then, most of my point stands strong, mass harem stories of five-plus women, barely last for long, if at all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back. Thank you fot updating |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m happy to see you return. I hope Morgan, Sakura and her servants and Ilya join the harem . Thanks for the update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Been a long while since reading this story. Looks well on how this went. |