Reviews for Action!
imteamclace chapter 1 . 4/13
'Edwin is a creepy little bastard' BAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAHA I love this so much, this made my day (well, night since it's midnight)! Love you, thanks for writing this xxx
TrueSkye chapter 1 . 2/21
I FREAKING LOVE THIS!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2015
"Edwin is a creepy little bastard". So true haha. Now if only the Bella in the real books could see that . . . .
Tee Hill chapter 1 . 6/3/2015
awesome
SagaDevotee chapter 1 . 2/5/2015
ha! omg! I love this! bravo!
AHealingRenaissance chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
Aro/Bella ;)
CrazyCountryGirl12 chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
Harry Potter. :) DRAMIONE! :) Love this story, it's really fantastic.
peace-out-girl chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
love it you should do a sequel to this bout shooting after the changes
TooLazyToLogin chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
I freaking adore Jasper/Bella! Funny story actually, the other day I was reading on my phone and my sister was watching Nickelodeon and the show she was watching was called Victorious, I don't know when but I started watching it and at the end I was like "Beck and Tori need to be together!" And my 9 year old sister was like "I KNOW RIGHT!"
Cecelia.Lunette chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
I agree whole heartedly. Edwin/Edward is a creepy little bastard. LOL
This is wonderfully written.
Holidai chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
Gah, I've never seen the movies but I would have if this had happened! I loved this lil' story, it was just-awesome! :D
NightOwlNeith chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
Nope. I have a lot of fanfics where I really don't like the canon couple but none where I like the couple and just don't like the actual storyline behind it
DGfleetfox chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
Oh if only. Jasper/Bella I will always support. This was amusing.
jessica.maye.9 chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
While i understand this was a one shot this is one i wish was a full story. I agree that they make a better pair and i wish this was how the books and movies were to begin with. Maybe one day you'll make a whole story out of this or another with the same pairing. Cudos to you love the story and thanks for the pleasure .
GeezerWench chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
This would have been so much better.

Edwin is outta here!

Preston and Caroline?

LOL

Very good!
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