Reviews for Third Wheel
Astoria Lilika chapter 1 . 8/31
It's cute. Great work!
Clarissa George306 chapter 1 . 4/11
So. That was great amazing. I loved that because of all of the Juvia Gajeel Bromance going on.
BoredPiglet chapter 1 . 9/6/2017
Love it! You gave me exactly what I'm looking for. I also felt a little bit disappointed that the friendship between Gajeel and Juvia were not showcased as much as other relationships but the little bit was enough to give the readers a full picture that they will always have each other's backs. That's why I'm so happy to see this story. Thank you!
suavespanol chapter 1 . 2/21/2017
I love the brOTP of Juvia x Gajeel
I wanted Gray to lose his cool the whole time
zuko chapter 1 . 12/8/2016
i need more juvia and gajeel friendship scenes. 3
zuko chapter 1 . 12/8/2016
this is so amazing. like i always wanted more of juvia and gajeel friendship and this is beyond my expectation 3.
Eve chapter 1 . 8/20/2016
This is so adorable! Love it!
jovysanchez17 chapter 1 . 5/11/2016
Gajeel and Juvia are also my BrOTP! They've known each other for a long time so it's not difficult for me to imagine that their bond and friendship go deeper than what is shown in the manga. I love how you made them very comfortable with each other and how they know each other so well. I also love the fact that Gray is jealous, but he doesn't realise it. Gajeel's right though, Gray shouldn't complain about how comfortable Gajeel and Juvia are with each other because it's completely platonic like how Gray's relationship with Erza and Lucy are. It's adorable to see that we can do things comfortably with friends that we consider as siblings, yet be a blushing uncomfotable mess when it happens between is and a special someone like how Gray is with Juvia. I really love this story, keep ip the good work.
TheRedSin chapter 1 . 4/17/2016
Best Gajuvia brotp fic. Enough said.
LAFIN124 chapter 1 . 4/2/2016
This is amazing!
Loved how u portrayed juvia & gajeel's friendship .

Well done!
child l like l smiles
Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
yay the gajeel juvia friendship is lovely :-) I haven't seen a lot of stories focusing mostly on just Gajeel and Gray, just Gruvia, so this was a nice surprise. Nice job!
allissrose chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
Gruvia is cool, but Gajeel and Juvia (brotp) is just unbeatable! I'm so glad you wrote them such an amazing story, because they need some love. And Gray being jealous is just too funny.
rinali24 chapter 1 . 10/10/2015
UGH. Gajeel and Juvia is my ultimate brotp. Thank you for writing this! It's like everything I expected of them when they go on missions together. They're best friends and no one can tell me otherwise haha
pearlmethystwhore chapter 1 . 7/2/2015
God, I needed this in my life.

I'm a 100% sucker for Juvia and Gajeel friendship fics. I've been hooked on them for a few days now. I don't know what Hiro's thinking by not exploring that dynamic a bit more. They're perfect in the friendship department. I can totally see this being written in as a special. You're an amazing writer, my friend. ;,)
endingsarenotalwaysbad chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
Okay, now let me tell you why this story is pure perfection!

Well, first of all I'm glad that we seem to be on the same page in the whole Gruvia and Gajuvia BROTP thing (to be honest, I would totally ship Gajeel and Juvia if there were other circumstances :'D)!

So, I must say I really ENJOYED this constellation. The thing that sometimes really annoys me in Fairy Tail is that it can be pretty monotone... It's always about Team Natsu - especially Natsu, Lucy and Erza is like the trump card if Natsu fails... So yeah... I get that they are the main characters and the story is about them, but still. It really bothers me how Mashima is handling his characters, not always but there could be better and more logical alternatives. So enough with the rant.

What I actually wanted to say is that I'm so glad that you made Gray join Gajeel and Juvia. I swear that I can't remember to see Gray and Gajeel interact. Yeah, yeah... the whole council thing aside when Gajeel wanted to lock them all up (hahahaha, I swear that was my personal highlight!).

Anyways, I loved that Gray could witness how close Gajeel and Juvia are. I had to smirk everytime Gray felt... jealous and irritated. First, it showed that Juvia's world isn't revolving around Gray and that she cares for more than one person. Second, I love to read more about the former Pantom Lord mages! Their friendship is precious and makes me laugh! The naked incident was a hint for your Gajuvia BROTP week OS, right?! hahahaha
And well, I think got a good glimpse in their point of view. Fairy Tail is a fun and open guild. I don't think that they are resentful, but still Gajeel and Juvia are newbies... I think they feel being left out as well on many occasions. So yeah... I think Gray can sympathize with them now.

Everytime something new happened I was like: yeah, that's totally my favorite part. But I can clearly tell you that the last scene where Gray and Gajeel talked about Juvia was by far the best and emotional to me. I love how they bonded over her! And somehow they might have now a connection because OF her. Both are so similar and still different... But still they have one important someone they have to share and that's beautiful. And that's how friendships start :D

So yeah! You did a really, REALLY great job! Lots of love to you! Though Lily would have been awesome, too :'DDD Though I guess his Exceed mission was really important. SO you are forgiven! haha
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