|Reviews for The Glass Menagerie|
| Enderkiller77 chapter 18 . 7/4
It's been a while sonce you've updated this story. I don't know if you're going through life issues, lost inspiration, or something else, but I've always waited and wondered when this masterpeice was going to be updated. I hope it can be one day. I want to learn more about Zaffre's past! Why does she hate the Arc family? What is that voice calling to her? What's even going to happen to her? Is she going to be kicked out of Beacon for this? How will everyone else react to her?
This is and probably will always be my favorite RWBY OC fanfiction. You've breathed so much life into these characters, cannon or not, and I've always been impressed by that. I hope that one day you can update this fic. The second you do I'm going to rush to read it once again!
| kinigget chapter 18 . 9/9/2016
anyway, I think I've finally got a pretty good read on Zaffre's character here
she's fallen so far into despair that she came out the other end, turning that wretchedness into a sort of armor.
But it's blinded her.
As much as she talks about Jaune being a liability, it's her inability to let go of the perceived danger that's the real liability.
Pyrrha was right to turn that accusation back against her
her all-consuming need to prove that Jaune isn't ready, isn't *worthy* has driven her from her team, away from the very people she's trying to "protect" by getting rid of Jaune
and she simply can't see it
because nothing else matters but preventing a repeat of whatever trauma it is that left her like this
but that's enough speculation, this was excellently written and beautifully executed and I have a distinct feeling that the climax is right around the corner
| kinigget chapter 17 . 3/29/2016
This is what Zaffre considers mercy
She's just trying to keep him from getting himself and his friends killed
Problem is, she's going about it exactly the wrong way
| MikeyJC chapter 17 . 3/29/2016
Yooooo that chapter was hype. I've been lurking on the spacebattles thread for this story and yes, I fully accept the soundtrack for this fic to be Ryu Ga Gotoku all the time, every time.
| Jaster Mereel's heir chapter 4 . 3/20/2016
First off, love the story. Second, there is no way you could have planned this, but the chemist was researching hard light applications, and it's revealed that Velvet's weapon can basically render hard light versions of whatever weapon she takes a picture of. That is the greatest unplanned event I've seen. Nice!
| tentaclecat chapter 1 . 2/14/2016
You know, after reading up to the latest chapter (16) I'm starting to think that you have a personal hate with Jaune given how things are going for him on the whole fanfic. I could be wrong or I could be close, real close in all honesty.
| SonatiShinonome chapter 16 . 2/9/2016
You know zaffre is right, jaune is a problem, in canon him got better but him is and always will be a problem, f*cking prick got amber killed just because pyrra screamed.
Can't wait for next chapter.
| Guest chapter 16 . 2/8/2016
You've managed to take a decent storyline and turn it into something truly interesting
I absolutely love the dynamic between Jaune and Zaffre here, and I cannot fault either one of them for their reactions. It's just...neither one of them actually *understands* the other. They've become symbols to each other, mere representations of their fears.
This is gonna take some work to get through this one
| kinigget chapter 15 . 1/6/2016
Oh this one is going to be loads of fun isn't it?
| kinigget chapter 14 . 11/15/2015
Seriously starting to wonder what Zaffre's beef with the Arc family is
All in good time I suppose
| kinigget chapter 12 . 11/15/2015
That was *beautiful*
| kinigget chapter 10 . 11/15/2015
Bell reminds me of no one so much as Canaan. Same color scheme, same fighting style, similar ability...
| kinigget chapter 7 . 11/14/2015
On a completely different note, I couldn't help but notice that Zaffre has what essentially amounts to a Stand, and can't help but wonder whether that was by accident or design
| kinigget chapter 6 . 11/14/2015
That was a hell of a thing all told.
On a continuity note, Velvet is at least a second-year when team RWBY show up. It's not a big concern though.
| kinigget chapter 3 . 11/14/2015
I am officially in love