|Reviews for The Place Where Worlds End|
| Bronwynn chapter 30 . 8/24/2011
All I can say is... WOW! This is truly an epic work. I love how you write Scarlett and Snake Eyes. Your fanfiction is amazing. I hope you post more.
| bioteacher chapter 51 . 3/29/2010
WOW! I knew this was an older story, but I just watched the "Worlds Without End" Episode, and then decided to read this. I love all of the "what-ifs" you had here - and the character interactions and the way you tied the "multiverse" together. Excellent writing- I noticed your clever titles too - great geek references. I like that you made Joe a little more serious too- after watching the show again, I'm so in awe that more people didn't die or get injured in the cartoon. This was a great story with most everyone in character- I'd love to read some more in this "world" if you ever write it again.
| ashanti01 chapter 8 . 8/16/2009
really good chapter. I'm really enjoying this story.
| AF Iron 135 chapter 51 . 6/25/2009
Great story... as I could tell how long it took me to read through its no surprise it took you years to write. Well done, very entertaining! BTW especially love your Snake-Eyes/Scarlett work...
| Agent-M-0167 chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
I was completely blown away with this story. It kind of fills in the gaps of what happens before that famed episode and how things end up. It's dark and dreary, but in the end all things tend to fit in its place.
| Harry2 chapter 51 . 9/9/2007
A nice way to finish off the story. Carry on soldier. Semper Fi. Yo Joe.
| Alison Hart-Burnett chapter 51 . 9/8/2007
I loved this ending. Totally loved it.
| White Eyebrow chapter 51 . 9/8/2007
I had to go back and re-read this one to jog my memory. This whole saga was a series of intertwining relationships. Very compelling; what a ride.
| ScarlettSlipper chapter 51 . 9/8/2007
Great ending! Thanks for writing this story! It's truly one of my favorites! SS
| trecebo chapter 51 . 9/8/2007
Well, a year is worth the wait for the epilogue. Nice rumination on Wreck's part. Hindsight can be a killer, but you have to learn perspective with it or it will eat you alive.
Flint as Prez? It could happen in this AU.
Great job in this all around.
| amykay chapter 51 . 9/8/2007
Yay! for adding the epilogue. This is one of my favorite stories, so it was a nice surprise seeing new material. I like that you expanded on the happy as it could be ending. Now I might have to read it all over from the start.
| Wolvmbm chapter 10 . 7/9/2007
You took a simple "What if" ending from an old episode of GI Joe and told it from the possible way of showing me that there is good within the one called Zarana.
Truthfully, I was hoping that you would played upon that certain ending from Zarana's view and showed them trying to start a family together after the fighting has ended and GI Joe was starting to be rebuilt. :(
However, the ending you came up with was just fine as it is. :)
Once again I would like to thank you for make such a great story for me to read. :D
| Wolvmbm chapter 50 . 7/9/2007
Never have I read a tale full of action/advture and shows us that true love can conquer all.
So is Cobra Commander dead, because to tell you the truth I truly didn't understand the final battle between him and Shipwreck.
And what of the other alternate surviving Joes and their loved ones will they be able to produce a future generation of heroes to defend the Earth.
Never have I read a story that powerful.
I truly hope that in the future that you can continue to write other tales in the way you wrote this one. :D
| Wolvmbm chapter 15 . 7/7/2007
Well who would have guessed that the Baroness would fall in love with a Joe ? ;)
Man, can't wait for more of this tale.
| Wolvmbm chapter 48 . 7/7/2007
Well it about time I saw a Snake-eyes vs Storm Shadow fight, even if the events were a bit different.
Wow what a great way to show the true feelings between Scarlett and Snake-eyes, I really am glad that they would be willing to stay and help out in the final fight.
I can not wait to read more of this great action pack story.