Awesome story!

I thought Marcus was woody from toy story. Especially when he put his hands out and shrugged his shoulders, that just seemed like a woody move.

This is on my top ten favorite Fanfic stories!

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.

You all did good with James. Most stories have him as one of the bad guys. I guess it’s easy to do with the role he played in Twilight.

You all out-did yourselves on this chapter…I absolutely LOVED it!

I think Chaos is the system/alarm in her condo.

I meant to say it a while ago…loving the Marvel references!

I totally get why Jasper is suspicious of Bella…it’s his job.

I like that they’re opening up to each other…I love this E & B!

I hope Mike gets his ass beat down!

They are sooo flirting with each other…it’s getting more intense.

For Donkey, I see death. She played with fire she wasn’t ready to handle. Smh

I’m hollering at how “Mama Bear” Bella got over the kids with Donkey. Lol I’m sure she never saw that coming. I wanted Bella to beat Donkey down…at least for a few minutes. Lol

I LOVE this Bella! I don’t have her figured out yet. But it seems like she has a lot of hurt in her past.

I’m really enjoying your story,,especially the nicknames. Lol

Emmett’s nickname is funny because Kellan Lutz actually played Hercules at on point

Love love love this whole story! Wow, 8 kids!

So glad Bella's pregnancy went good and so did delivery. I have 3 kids. My 1st labor from 1st contraction to delivery was 4 hours. Then my 2nd was 2 hours. My 3rd was 2 1/2 hours.