Reviews for This Thing Of Ours |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have just finished reading this . I have read it before but not for a long time . I have to admit I had forgotten how good it was . I have read all of your finished stories and I have liked all of them . |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok I will confess when I saw the name Dot Matrix I could hear Joan Rivers voice when Bella whooped in alarm |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought Marcus was woody from toy story. Especially when he put his hands out and shrugged his shoulders, that just seemed like a woody move. |
![]() ![]() This is on my top ten favorite Fanfic stories! Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. |
![]() ![]() You all did good with James. Most stories have him as one of the bad guys. I guess it’s easy to do with the role he played in Twilight. |
![]() ![]() You all out-did yourselves on this chapter…I absolutely LOVED it! |
![]() ![]() I think Chaos is the system/alarm in her condo. |
![]() ![]() I meant to say it a while ago…loving the Marvel references! |
![]() ![]() I totally get why Jasper is suspicious of Bella…it’s his job. I like that they’re opening up to each other…I love this E & B! |
![]() ![]() I hope Mike gets his ass beat down! |
![]() ![]() They are sooo flirting with each other…it’s getting more intense. For Donkey, I see death. She played with fire she wasn’t ready to handle. Smh |
![]() ![]() I’m hollering at how “Mama Bear” Bella got over the kids with Donkey. Lol I’m sure she never saw that coming. I wanted Bella to beat Donkey down…at least for a few minutes. Lol |
![]() ![]() I LOVE this Bella! I don’t have her figured out yet. But it seems like she has a lot of hurt in her past. I’m really enjoying your story,,especially the nicknames. Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Emmett’s nickname is funny because Kellan Lutz actually played Hercules at on point |