Reviews for Gohan's Redemption |
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![]() ![]() ![]() what a great story! I can't wait the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Story's being too slow. You've got the premise and obviously you can write, so I think you can do better with the pacing. Too many thoughts. Didn't really read; just skimmed through since it didn't grab my attention. Thought I was reading a DBZ fanfic and not a crossover, even though I get that you were trying to set things up first. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you update soon It's good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really great story so far, very interested in seeing what will happen next Update Soon |
![]() ![]() Keep it up dude .gr8 story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant read so far, please continue! |
![]() ![]() No proud dsiyan would enjoy watching amother siyan suffer under gtieza. Radiz is just a Scumbag |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is great and I'm sure people won't waiting longer for longer chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start please update |
![]() ![]() Not bad |