Reviews for Goodbye Peter Pan |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is absolutely amazing |
![]() ![]() I read the whole story and you made Bella into such a dirty cvnt. Why have Mike in the story if you’re doing to do him dirty like that? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great storywonderful writing . So glad I discovered this . Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoaaa! So close! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh oh. That was forward. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! What a note! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I keep wanting to put this down to go make dinner. Then the chapter ends and I need to know what comes next. Ugh. Such good cliffhangers |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh he’s full of jokes |
![]() ![]() ![]() There are so very many New Moon AUs out there, but this is one of the best. Beautifully written. I loved the idea of Edward somehow aging while they were apart, and in my mind, Bella's tiny bit of venom slowed her aging, so that they ended up looking the same age for eternity. I loved that they made it a point to learn how to interact in ways that broke their former patterns. I also really enjoyed Rose and Jacob both being decent and mature. I just really enjoyed this all around. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was so well written and I loved an older couple vs. the teen angst, not that there wasn't a ton of angst. Very interesting twist with her vampire bite! The whole situation with Mike was so doomed, but Edward was pretty despicable many times. Quite human in his selfishness really. I can't believe that you managed to write a story where I feel deeply for Mike! He lost so much! He didn't deserve anything thrown at him, but life tends to work that way. I'm glad he got his happy ever after with a woman who could really love him and the family he deserved to love! Life as a widower was the best outcome for his happiness. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Thank you for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story. I love it. Thank you for sharing... |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of the (few) best NM AU ever. Thank you for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mikes lovely (never thought I’d say that) and he didn’t deserve this. Bella should,have stuck with him. |
![]() ![]() I am re-reading this and enjoying it so much... it’s one of my favourites. |