Reviews for Goodbye Peter Pan
Guest chapter 36 . 9/23/2014
moosals chapter 36 . 9/23/2014
Just brilliant! I've enjoyed every single part of their journey leading to this moment.

After the last line of the previous chapter I was expecting a car crash or some kind of accident, but not this. I love how you have constructed it, that this explains Alice's feeling, that they had to be here and of course, Edward and Bella had to have time to be able to repair their relationship first for her to let down her shield and accept her new future.

Rosalie was wonderful (as were Jasper, Seth and Jacob), but I'm very happy Edward got there in time, especially as he got to enjoy hearing Bella's thoughts.

Wonderful chapter, worth the wait. I hope all is well with your family now. Thanks so much :)
Guest chapter 36 . 9/23/2014
Beautiful chapter!
sherylb chapter 36 . 9/23/2014
beckysue999 chapter 36 . 9/23/2014
Loved all the unexpectedness of this chapter - the robbery, the need for the change, Jacob, Rose. Just perfect : ) .
nattynel80 chapter 36 . 9/23/2014
PBJilly chapter 36 . 9/23/2014
Intense. Loved the ending.
pimm cullen chapter 36 . 9/23/2014
Oh! I didn't expect it to happen like that. I'm glad Edward made it to her in time.
twilly chapter 36 . 9/23/2014
Oh man. I was totally okay for the entire chapter until that last sentace. I'm going to have to go hide in the stairwell so my coworkers don't see me crying. I love it. It was perfect, even the Rosalie and Jacob parts. Maybe especially those.
Elvire23 chapter 36 . 9/23/2014
Oh my Gosh!
kal0797 chapter 36 . 9/23/2014
All I have to say is "WOW!"
TessLouise chapter 36 . 9/23/2014
SO lovely!
GorGirl chapter 36 . 9/23/2014
Yay! Together forever!
mo kagen chapter 36 . 9/23/2014
thank you!
katmom chapter 35 . 9/23/2014
I submitted my review for the next chapter too quickly. After rereading it, I want to complement you on your Rosalie. Reading her part was exquisite. Again, thank you for posting.

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