Reviews for The Ivory Curse
Kikuriki chapter 3 . 5/14
Tbh I hope the twincest doesn't happen soon, Naruko or Narumi w/e seems super vapid and like she'd steamroll over any opinions Naruto has without any serious maturation happening between her now and whenever they get together (and they're like 12-13 thats practically toddlers its Too Soon). Like she kinda listens to Naruto, but he has to snap at her to shut the hell up and listen first, otherwise she just. Chugs on and doesn't listen. NaruSasu seems like a more likely and emotionally healthy pairing at this point, even though I'm totally down with brotps.
Oblivion196 chapter 3 . 1/18
Please please please continue this story!
willam and jack and jake chapter 3 . 12/9/2016
nice love it can't wait to read more
willam and jack and jake chapter 2 . 12/9/2016
cool very well done
willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 12/9/2016
Guest chapter 2 . 11/7/2016
Ninjas aren't supposed to reveal what they are capable of so willingly like that.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2016
The Hokage is the absolute lead of the village you moron.
Tony McNucklz chapter 3 . 6/2/2016
Seriously good start to the story. another review mentioned the council exhiling naruto doesn't make sense, which in the context you wrote it doesn't. how would the council exile someone from a clan? and why would the clans allow the council to have that kind of power over their members? plus if the council made the decision I'd expect narutos hatred to be more towards them and the rest of the clan system than his father. you could easily fix this by re-writing the events as the council trying to enforce an old law that would separate a new bloodline from an existing clan into a new clan if that bloodline was not previously known within that clan (and maybe with only one member that hasn't produced any offspring he has no rights to protect him, leaving him friendless feared and defenseless like you originally set up), requiring only the hokages signature, and to make naruto blame his father all you have to do is put in Minato caving to the council instead of sticking up for his son and boom the story continues. or it would continue if you were still writing. which you should. because this has a unique start. I think. anyways I hope you do continue this eventually.
Tony McNucklz chapter 3 . 5/27/2016
I'd like to see this continued. it definitely has promise.
IK chapter 1 . 5/18/2016
It honestly doesn't make much sense. Even if the council voted for it, they have no grounds to call for Naruto's excommunication. By doing that, they give the council the right to excommunicate any member of any clan, leaving themselves and their clans vulnerable to the same judgement.
dinohuntsmen chapter 3 . 4/26/2016
U dead
Centh97 chapter 3 . 3/12/2016
please update this story
PrototypeGear chapter 1 . 3/7/2016
Ya know, when you have a premise like this, one with a lot of potential, and you abandon it to the void, it's incredibly dissapointing. Amazing grammar, a descent take on the whole namikaze family thing, a rarely used, yet awsome, bloodline ability, and yet you do nothing with it.

So fucking annoying.
ElementalMaster16 chapter 3 . 3/29/2015
very cool fic so far!

Uzumaki no Rinne-Sennin chapter 3 . 3/18/2015
Update soon man and make your chapters more lengths.
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