|Reviews for The Ivory Curse|
| ElementalMaster16 chapter 3 . 3/29
very cool fic so far!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_)
| Uzumaki no Rinne-Sennin chapter 3 . 3/18
Update soon man and make your chapters more lengths.
| darrius212 chapter 3 . 3/11
Hello my name is Darrius and I want you to please continue updating your story it's getting better and better now that I can't wait till you update your story but yeah Please continue to update your fanfiction it's getting better and better now so please continue to updating please and thank you.
| chris kidder chapter 3 . 3/8
keep on writing
| uscias chapter 3 . 3/8
please update soon.
| ZenakuOkami chapter 3 . 1/23
Please sire may I have some more?
| Thewarrior1180 chapter 3 . 1/20
this chapter was pretty good, so don't beat yourself up. I hope you can get back into it, so you can put more out, I really like it now :D got me hooked hmph :P
| Thewarrior1180 chapter 2 . 1/20
lots of potential from this, hope you can deliver ;P so far so good, really enjoying it, hope you update soon..
| Thewarrior1180 chapter 1 . 1/20
love it so far :D
| Ignisami chapter 1 . 1/8
As good as the premise is for this story , I cannot help but point out one very, very big sore point.
I cannot positively imagine a situation where the Clans of Konoha would allow a non-clan member, even the Council, to excommunicate any clan member even with an overwhelming majority vote.
To do so would invite the Council to excommunicate any member of *any* clan that was making a ruckus... including Heirs (assuming that the Namikaze and Uzumaki are patriarchal with masculine premogenitur, Naruto would have been Heir to the Namikaze and Uzumaki) and a short slippery slope from allowing the Council to vote to excommunicate a Clan Head.
AFter all, if they can do it to the son of the Hokage, the leader of the, why would they not be capable of doing so to *any* clan?
| myulander chapter 2 . 11/17/2014
| SaucyHandles chapter 3 . 11/5/2014
Awesome story, update soon!
| DragonPony022 chapter 3 . 10/21/2014
I have to admit I am really liking your story. This Naruto isn't a full jerk or Dark he kinda just doesn't take crap. But he 'IS' still a nice guy to anyone he see as being worth being nice to. I also hope he doesn't become a elitist type or anything but he seems to be too chill to become like that so that is a good thing lol. I do have to admit I am dying to see some Naruto Narumi moments, I feel she can get him to open up and get that boney stick that is up his ass from time to time. And I feel that would make a interesting couple once we get to see more of her character. I could see her taking him out for a day on the town to celebrate them passing since she know now not to bring up 'her' father. I totally see him letting it slip of him calling it a date causing her to blush lol
Anyway can't wait for your next chapter.
| Damon chapter 3 . 10/17/2014
this was really awesome. though i wonder why he got rid of his uzumaki name unless he did out of spite for minato?
| Damon chapter 3 . 10/16/2014
hope this gets continued cause its awesome. though im wondering why you had naruto give up his uzumaki he did it to spite minato?