Reviews for Persephone
hopefuladdict chapter 10 . 1/31
Wow...just...wow.
gothicgryf chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
This is brilliant but when I read it all I can hear in my head is diary of jane by braking benjamin phobia is the perfect a company album for this fic absolutely fantastic loving it xxxxxx
avidreadercina chapter 10 . 7/1/2014
I love this! The ending is perfect.
vampgirliegirl chapter 10 . 6/26/2014
keep going so addicting!
MMF chapter 10 . 6/23/2014
What an ending. Excellent, excellent story. Thank you for writing it.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/23/2014
Ugh this was just fantastic. Thank you!
sondragonfly chapter 10 . 6/19/2014
Very well written. I really enjoyed how you used the Persephone myth in this context. Hell of a cliffhanger, though. ;)
Liets chapter 10 . 6/14/2014
Oh My God. Loved it, loved it, loved it. Brilliant story, absolutely brilliantly written. Never let anyone tell you that you do not have a gift.
Stephanie MRV chapter 10 . 6/13/2014
That is an awesome ending. I for one cant decide so if it were up to me:
After she realizes she cant win she decides to grab a dagger and stand in front of both of them. Saying 'until death right? ' to loki and then look at thor making each anticipating her next move. and then thrust the knife into herself knowing were to do it so it is not fatal. then say 'i made my choice'. Causing both of them to panic and save her. Either one relinquishes her or they both agree to leave things be for herself since she will always choose their happiness over her own.
I know its too sappy and wrong but i just dont want neither of them to hurt plus they both have their faults.
Thor leaves her alone even when she is with him. He stopped showing passion in their relationship.
Loki tricked her into that situation and continues to cause havok. He cant even settle for having her for three months.
Sorry this review is so long but i loved this story.
Mrs. Darcy chapter 10 . 6/6/2014
ANOTHER! (breaks forward click button!)

Wow, I absolutely loved every single chapter of yours. I felt you captured the true essence your main characters and delved delightedly into their inner thoughts. Especially, Jane to be faced with death then offered semi immortality it was quite exciting to see her growing. Oh and how I loved Loki in all his sexy glory (not a loki fan at all ;-P ) Please write some more Lokane! Pretty please!
MrsSwords chapter 10 . 6/1/2014
Ooph. A punch to the gut this was. So it *was* because she was angry with him. I guess he always wanted her to choose, but he didn't want her to choose him because she'd convinced herself that he was something he wasn't. He didn't want her to get the idea that she'd somehow 'tamed' him. So he reminded her of *exactly* who he was, and he didn't like the results, so *then* he made her choose. Loki through and through.

But she's wrong. Loki hasn't won at all. It's all in the way he phrased his last question 'free to spend the rest of eternity with your husband'. Jane will always love the stars more - neither of them every truly had her.

Thanks for this! It was an excellent read.
JustAnotherScribbler chapter 10 . 6/1/2014
Loki is such a ****
I love how you ended this with just having Loki win, it was a really good idear : )
mfaerie32 chapter 10 . 6/1/2014
That's it? REally? I'm a little disappointed to be honest. (
JustAnotherScribbler chapter 9 . 5/7/2014
can't wait for last chapter :)
Maria Hiemalis chapter 9 . 5/7/2014
Oh Jane, Jane... I feel that perhaps she is just going through the motions of whatever is happening in her relationship with Thor. She even went on and asked him they were "happy." That's a big red sign. Not just that, but the fact that Thor asked her to marry him because he felt her slipping away... He should have told her about his troubles, talked about what was going on between the both of them.

I believe whatever she has going on with Loki has jaded her, all up to the point where she would do something so uncharacteristic. She invited him just so he could see her how she is with Thor, something Loki will never really have with her. They may spend time together, occasionally have sex but Loki will never have what she has with Thor, regardless if it isn't perfect.

I wonder if one day she just gives up and stays with Loki. That would be heartbreaking for me. (Even if Lokane is my ship!)
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