|Reviews for Persephone|
| Yanafava chapter 1 . 1/3
Wow! This is such a good story! I would love to read more, whether a sequel or a totally new lokane:)
| Wynni chapter 10 . 11/30/2015
Hell of a cliffhanger ending, chicka.
| marganaPendragon chapter 10 . 9/19/2015
I absolutely loved this -5 Stars"! I have been looking for that rare & engaging novel that reminds me of the Goddess (old religion} where a woman can have a husband & a Chosen One, (as in The Guinevere Triology,,) wtf not, not as men from Norse mythology on down did such often. You are a great testament to feminism & I red. This story super highly,! -docAnn , Admin of FB page, " Loki In Love , & Loki & Thor of Asgard"
| hopefuladdict chapter 10 . 1/31/2015
| gothicgryf chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
This is brilliant but when I read it all I can hear in my head is diary of jane by braking benjamin phobia is the perfect a company album for this fic absolutely fantastic loving it xxxxxx
| avidreadercina chapter 10 . 7/1/2014
I love this! The ending is perfect.
| vampgirliegirl chapter 10 . 6/26/2014
keep going so addicting!
| MMF chapter 10 . 6/23/2014
What an ending. Excellent, excellent story. Thank you for writing it.
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/23/2014
Ugh this was just fantastic. Thank you!
| sondragonfly chapter 10 . 6/19/2014
Very well written. I really enjoyed how you used the Persephone myth in this context. Hell of a cliffhanger, though. ;)
| Liets chapter 10 . 6/14/2014
Oh My God. Loved it, loved it, loved it. Brilliant story, absolutely brilliantly written. Never let anyone tell you that you do not have a gift.
| Stephanie MRV chapter 10 . 6/13/2014
That is an awesome ending. I for one cant decide so if it were up to me:
After she realizes she cant win she decides to grab a dagger and stand in front of both of them. Saying 'until death right? ' to loki and then look at thor making each anticipating her next move. and then thrust the knife into herself knowing were to do it so it is not fatal. then say 'i made my choice'. Causing both of them to panic and save her. Either one relinquishes her or they both agree to leave things be for herself since she will always choose their happiness over her own.
I know its too sappy and wrong but i just dont want neither of them to hurt plus they both have their faults.
Thor leaves her alone even when she is with him. He stopped showing passion in their relationship.
Loki tricked her into that situation and continues to cause havok. He cant even settle for having her for three months.
Sorry this review is so long but i loved this story.
| Mrs. Darcy chapter 10 . 6/6/2014
ANOTHER! (breaks forward click button!)
Wow, I absolutely loved every single chapter of yours. I felt you captured the true essence your main characters and delved delightedly into their inner thoughts. Especially, Jane to be faced with death then offered semi immortality it was quite exciting to see her growing. Oh and how I loved Loki in all his sexy glory (not a loki fan at all ;-P ) Please write some more Lokane! Pretty please!
| MrsSwords chapter 10 . 6/1/2014
Ooph. A punch to the gut this was. So it *was* because she was angry with him. I guess he always wanted her to choose, but he didn't want her to choose him because she'd convinced herself that he was something he wasn't. He didn't want her to get the idea that she'd somehow 'tamed' him. So he reminded her of *exactly* who he was, and he didn't like the results, so *then* he made her choose. Loki through and through.
But she's wrong. Loki hasn't won at all. It's all in the way he phrased his last question 'free to spend the rest of eternity with your husband'. Jane will always love the stars more - neither of them every truly had her.
Thanks for this! It was an excellent read.
| JustAnotherScribbler chapter 10 . 6/1/2014
Loki is such a ****
I love how you ended this with just having Loki win, it was a really good idear : )