Reviews for The Greatest There Was or Ever Will Be: Kanto League Journeys
Guest chapter 17 . 5/24/2020
Are Ash/Giselle the main pairing? I'm hoping that they will be
SmashJaw chapter 14 . 5/23/2020
I want to ask you some things if you don’t mind.

Will Vee be able to turn into all of his evolutions or just those three.

Will Ash have other occupations like Pokémon Ranger and Pokémon Connoisseur.

When Ash goes to Johto, will he catch a Gligar and evolve it into a Gliscor. And if so will he then have it train his original one so he can be more confident and strong.

When Ash goes to the Unova region and where Pikachu gets hit by that Thunder attack by Zekrom, are you going to do this thing where instead of temporary losing access to his electric moves he actually absorbs the attack which then causes him to have the same power level as a legendary.

And my last one when will Ash gain control over his powers, and how exactly will he and his Pokémon be like after said achievement.

I hope you at least answer my forth and fifth question and have a nice day.

P.S. great story by the way.
Wk27 chapter 17 . 5/24/2020
This has got to be one of my favourite Pokemon Fanfictions, the chapters may be long but it allows for character development which is important for a story that wants to reframe the charactere of a well defined series. So I find your style of writing to be enjoyable and that you shouldn't have to change it. Though I do have a request/suggestion is it possible to split your chapters into smaller sections like chapter 18 part A then chapter 18 part b not because I don't like the way you write but having like 30k words to scroll through makes it hard to keep track especially if the browser reloads or we need to reopen the story. Obviously you don't have to but for consumption of this format of media it might be beneficial to us to a certain degree.
Guest chapter 12 . 5/21/2020
I seriously hope you’re not going to ship Ash with Jessie because although you are a great writer, I doubt even you could make that work.
X chapter 9 . 5/18/2020
You know after reading this chapter again I just have to ask, when Misty thought that Giselle’s touch felt nice what was that telling us, because if your doing what I think your doing then I’m REALLY going to love this story even more. (Sorry if that sounds disrespectful in any way to other people that are reading this comment)

I also have two ideas for you in this story.

1. After watching Demon Slayer and seeing Zenitsu on screen it gave me an idea, why not give Ash a Pokémon that is born with this unexplainable condition where it only has one move. And so when Ash catches it he helps that Pokémon train that move where it is practically unbeatable. As for the kind of Pokémon it should be you can decide on that if you want.

2. If you ever have Ash catch a Ditto can you do this thing where when it turns into a Pokémon, it turns into a more bigger and stronger version of it.

I would also like to apologize for me rushing you, take as much time as you need.
X chapter 17 . 5/16/2020
Look I’m sorry that I’m rushing you but I REALLY hope you update real soon, this story is way to good to wait for. And yes I know that each of your chapters are at least 30 to 40k long and I’m really surprised that you have a patience to type that long but please, I just can’t wait to read another one of your perfect chapters.

So again sorry for rushing, but I hope you update soon.
44K chapter 17 . 5/15/2020
I want to say sorry for my blunt and gross comment, what I meant to say was when will Ash reach the right age for that kind of romantic activity (at least it sounds less weird, right).

Also just like ‘X’ I’m also very interested on how Ash will react to Paul and Trip in this story.
Mimeomia chapter 1 . 5/16/2020
I'm just gonna skip this chapter 'cause I think it's pretty cliche and boring af
BobTheSpongy chapter 7 . 5/16/2020
Great story man. I started reading this about a year ago but had to stop because it started showing blank from halfway through the 7th page. Then I saw this story again and checked whether it has been corrected. To my surprise it was. I'm enjoying this story. Keep up the good work. And please update soon️️
44K chapter 7 . 5/14/2020
When will there be any sexual activities between Ash and other girls.
Guest chapter 17 . 5/13/2020
This story is really good! Please continue with story it's really good
20XD chapter 17 . 5/12/2020
In one of your chapters Ash said he wanted to try poetry, so when he goes to Sinnoh and meets Dawn how will she react to him since she is a super fan of professor Oak’s poetry I really want to know how she’ll thinks of Ash. Especially when he becomes a coordinator, it would be cool if he help her out on coordination.
HolyFox chapter 17 . 5/10/2020
I hope Ash has more moments just like he had with Butterfree, that was definitely the definition of marvelous.

Will Pikachu start showing interest towards Vulpix as well.

When Ash becomes the Kanto champion how will his life be when he goes to the Orange Islands and Johto.

When Ash eventually gains full control of his powers can you please tell us how Bad-Ass Ash will be.

How will Ash act towards Cynthia, because I really hope they’ll also have a thing for each other.
PhaedoHammer chapter 17 . 5/10/2020
I looked at my comment and I just want to let you know I meant “are you”, not “are I”. Sorry for the confusion.
TheFirstGod chapter 17 . 5/10/2020
Will Ash bring his old Pokémon to other regions, like bringing his Kanto Pokémon to Johto and etc.

And also if “X” is going to suggest powers for Ash then here’s mine. Can you give Ash this ability to go in a dimension that works just like the Hyperbolic Time Chamber from Dragon Ball. That way Ash, his Pokémon, and his other companions can become more stronger.
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