So like...is there not a new chapter?

so the new chapter is an old one, according to my alert this was supposed to be a new chapter

I think you need check your chapters 6 and 7

AMAZING CHAPTER
Love hunter just want to hug him and give him all of love

i swear ive read this chapter before, major Deja Vu. still a good chap though

Ok I just finish re-reading ch:15 and I just have to go and ask, is Ash going to have a harem, because don’t get me wrong that would be awesome but if in the end he only gets one girl(who he only saw once in the series) and you did all that whole “love triangle thing” for nothing than that’s just cruel.

Just re-read ch:13, and again I really like the fact that you gave Ash an Eevee that evolves at will at any time. And I know you are probably really busy but I really hope you update really soon.

Just finished re-reading Ch:12, I still think Ash should have let Charmander burn that Team Rocket grunt to death, yeah I know his just 10 and shouldn’t think stuff like that but come on, killing a bad guy doesn’t make you more worst than them. But it’s your story not mine and I’m still enjoying it, and again I’m glad you had both Charmander, Bulbasaur and Squirtle evolve, that was a very smart thing, unlike the original where they only had Charmander evolve.

P.S. I really hope you update soon because this story is like a drug to me.

On ch:10 it was kinda disappointing that he didn’t want those two fighting type Pokémon but again it’s your story not mine, but I got to ask, is Ash going to gain the loyalty of the Legendary‘s and start capturing them one by one because that would be GREAT, but if not I totally understand.

I just re-read ch:9 and I just want to tell you that I really can’t wait when Ash becomes a Pokémon Coordinator, and I’m going to guess he’s going to be very talented in that provision just as he is as a trainer in this story as well. I also can’t wait when all the Elite Four members and other champions watch him win the Pokémon league and then challenges them, keeping the promise he made in this chapter. Anyway hope you update soon but take your time because to be honest your the only person I know that makes fan fiction stories this long and I really see that as a very impressive skill.

Been truly loving this story in spite of the romance and Giselle. I’m still not a fan of hers but the development in this story keeps me reading.

One thing: why is Solidad’s rival/final opponent in this chapter called Derek when she was talking about “Harley” in a previous one?

i don't like richard, he looks like iemitsu sawada from khr. But from there everything is fine.

For the option of either making all the Pokémon series into separate stories or add them to is story and make it a HUGE story, I would say you should make them separate.

Really hope you update soon and sorry if it seems I’m rushing you.

Probably should have called Oak about that Dragonite. Hope he takes it outside before releasing it.

When you reach the BW series can you do this things where Ash gives his Oshawott love advice just like how he did with Butterfree, your probably wondering why i’m suggesting this, I just feel sorry for the poor guy for always being heart broken.