Too disappointing. Everything is the same as canon even the fights and dialogues. It feels like the author is just copy pasting the original one piece and adding slight differences.

This was pathetic. Why is he struggling against someone he can take out in one hit.

honestly this Luffy is no different from any other actually he's worse as he lost his crew last time so i find it hard to believe that he would take a beating when some tried to take away the girls, this story is honestly a waste of time if you are reading this and are looking for a different kind on Luffy fic then i suggest u move on.

this story is boring you haven't changed Luffy at all so he would still lose at the end whether he's stronger or not he's still a childish idiot that's unfit to be a captain

in between but hey nobody's perfect

Noice

"Like, O. M. G. Like seriously ooooh ma-GOOOSSSH!? The first one was traaash." "I can't believe it was made, kukuku." ... "I'm also trash at writing."

Figured I'd do some parody of the people that were reviewing you. Pulled most of that material from Fortnite yeah talk with my nephew

Lol, but seriously can't wait for the rewrite. So what if they didn't like it? There's lots of other material for them to go enjoy.

I'll probably start reading your other with while I'm waiting

Can I use this fanfic idea? It sounds really interesting, although the harem and sexual parts I'll leave out. Mostly just the "go back in time" sort of stuff. Maybe I'll make luffy a bit smarter, he does have like 12 years of reliving, why doesn't he take up reading. A poet Luffy?

This open open fruit looks actually posible. It would be something like the stronger version of the door door fruit. It removes the weakness of having the openings needing to be does and the time travel part would most likely be the awakening ability.

sorry wrong guy, multiple tabs open my bad

Loved this story and your Love Live story (Rising from the Bottom)! Hope you get to the rewrite soon!

Just to let you know I really hope you get the rewrite one soon and I like your first one too of the story and don't let those assholes put you down

Why would luffy recruit such a worthless character? If anything he should have waited to recruit someone decent when he first entered the. Grandline but no, he's gonna fill his crew with mediocre people himself . Way to ruin a story.

The flamethrowersvcan burn! You're doin a great job man!

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