Good job with this chapter and its a good thing that coby is safe.

It's a good thing that old man Phil opens luffy eyes towards women and I hope that Garp will train luffy very seriously.

Thank you for making this a one piece TimeTravel Story and good luck luffy.

Plz keep up this amazing fanfic no one should bashing you like that

I think this story is pretty cool. I'm eagerly awaiting the rewrite.

Hey "Disappointed"
Shut the fuck up!
Until you write story then we'll see who's better but right your just a some fucking troll retard who's living his mother's basement making her think if she should have gotten that abortion or not.

Very rarely will a story this long get a favorite from me this fast. But dear god, opening Luffy's eyes to women just got me.

Ah, another brainless idiot writing a story.

Leaving a murderous pirate just walk away with a slight threat. Do you know what would happen in reality? He would return after Luffy left and slaughter the village alongside Kaya. GG WP ya retard, you lose.

I mean... One Piece was always utterly downright retarded and only with a brain out of commission one managed to enjoy it but to think even One Piece fanfiction writers have trash for brains... Sigh.

Mot the best start... oh, who am I kidding. This was horrible.

But it is much better than most so :D I'mma continue reading for now.

honestly this story is golden. fuck your haters. they can kiss your and my ass. keep up the good work

its all just Canon rehash with a few Interesting moments so far and Luffy getting some ... I don't get it why its so popular?

alvida 3

fuck dem nobles!

goa incident?

that was excellent! luffy got into her pants finally!