This is a really interesting Fanfic, but I understand why this needs a rewrite, and this chapter really makes this look especially bad. I look forward to your rewrite.

oh ok. where is the rewrite?

hey i just read this a week ago and just finish it today and i gotta say it cool and i just see the review where luffy get his ass kick by bellamy and crocodile the first and they get mad about it for me it's cool because time travel stuff is confusing as hell and i will excited for the rewrite

Griefers are an unavoidable part of the Internet, unfortunately. The fact that this story has been in the top 3 Favorited One Piece stories for YEARS speaks to how good it was. When something is more well-known, it will have a bigger fan-base AND a bigger hate-base.

Looking forward to the rewrite given how well-done this was!

Fucking luffy with his stupid go lucky attitude. He experienced of his friends dead but he is still pretending. Fucking boring fanfic.

good fanfic but bad spelling and grammar

I liked the 1st one, I am hoping to see your rewrite and this time tale your time writing it since One Piece isn't ending soon and it will allow you to make a plot line more solid... one other thing, You wrote what you want since thats why most of us are here, to see your story and although you should consider structured criticism, just disregard the flamers since every fix has it, even the most viewed and fav... AND make sure you are doing the fix for the right reasons, do this for you first and for your readers 2nd because the other way around will just frustrate you... Hope it was helpful, peace out

Your one of the few people who are actually trying to write the complete story.
Yes it was hitting to close to cannon but at least you're doing something. Besides the story was great.
There was a lot of changes, most of all you did not skip the episodes between alabasta and skypia.
I'll be looking forward to your rewrite.

For the first time in history
It's gonna start raining men (start raining men)
It's raining men, hallelujah, it's raining men, amen
I'm gonna go out to run and let myself get
Absolutely soaking wet
It's raining men, hallelujah
It's raining men, every specimen

Honestly I thought this story was amazing and I can’t wait to see what you have planned for the rewrite and I will patiently wait to see what you change and what you add to it.

personally i dont think there was a problem with the story being bad at all, it just felt like It stuck a little too close to cannon

Funniest shit ive ever seen

Hey, you're finally awake

Hey man, feel free to PM me the answers;
1. Any ETA on the rewrite?
2. Are the new crew members going to remain the same?

NICE