Reviews for Luffy's Renewed Adventure
Fog Repair Ship Akashi chapter 115 . 8/29/2020
Hey man, feel free to PM me the answers;
1. Any ETA on the rewrite?
2. Are the new crew members going to remain the same?
Drake.Dman chapter 115 . 8/29/2020
g77471164 chapter 7 . 8/28/2020
It really feels great to have a refresher with alterations to the story.

Thank you very much
May you have a great day
g77471164 chapter 2 . 8/28/2020
Love this man! One-Piece reset!

And so I was thinking what to read next, well I only read Overlord & One-Punch Man fanfics.
And then I thought

"Why not One-Piece?"

So there goes my search by sorting by the "favs" part. I started by reading the chapter names & then right at the 2nd position, I read 'F-ckthesystem125'.

"Huh!? Wait! That's the one-punch man guy, right?"

So I go off to check your profile, and voila, there it is, "The Hero Harem!"

And off I go into the world of One-Piece.

Thank you very much
May you have a great day
Yoase chapter 115 . 8/28/2020
true true ! preach to your words
underlust sans chapter 115 . 8/21/2020
Try to ignore them
Some people just love put people down just because they can, even when they have no idea what there talking about
Guest chapter 4 . 8/18/2020
I love how something is confusing to luffy even when explained he say mysteory something
Thean Bitter Crowe chapter 115 . 8/16/2020
I recommend you not label the remake as “romance.” Have a protagonist have lots of sex with near random ladys, but then also have them try to get romantic with a single girl at the same time, just makes them look like an asshole.
rankodiva chapter 44 . 8/14/2020
so nami is ok sharing him even thou they have not even so much as looked at each other in a romance way since they slept with each other
rankodiva chapter 31 . 8/14/2020
after how close luffy and nami got in her village there has not even been a single look between them since like that whole thing never happened ?
Fallen Angel 12-31-89 chapter 115 . 8/14/2020
dont listen to the haters your story has really good bones and you can build a really great fanfiction in your rewrite
ADRIANNAMIKAZE chapter 115 . 8/9/2020
Man I read the whole fanfic and I have some things to comment, more to remember are not critical, more holes in the story.
1- The way Luffy acted is impossible, Luffy lost everyone he loved, but even so he acted like a child, which honestly is impossible, after going through all this he at least should have matured mentally and started to act more seriously .
2-The way the new members were used is quite reasonable, Alvida for example, note that she was only put in the story for Luffy to have sex, as she has an akuma no mi op, which makes her immune to any type of attack other than kairoseki or haki. understand, even in the big haki line it is rare, which in itself shows how strong it can be.
3-One of Luffy's goals when going back in time is to make everyone stronger, so much so that he asks his grandfather to teach him the six navy attacks, only he doesn't teach them to his nakamas only later in history he starts teaching, he must start teaching the moment each joins the team.
Well, there are a few more things that you understand, you should pay attention to those little details.
In general it is a great story with good development, good fights, etc ...
(One thing that bothered me a lot was the fact that Luffy didn’t care if his girls were seen by other men, so change that in the rewrite, it’s very disconcerting to read about it, I mean, if it was a fic without romance it would even be good , but there is romance in this fic and we know that they are luffy women so seila is a little strange to read).
fanficreviewer69 chapter 89 . 8/6/2020
this story really does need a rewrite but not so much of one. the biggest issue is that you sent Luffy back in time to make his crew stronger and he hasn't really been doing that there were like three mentions of him kinda training them, I mean you can fit haki training in during the regular story or the time traveling between islands. like when they were practice shooting the cannon could of blindfolded usopp and train that way or when they went down the dark mine tunnel to the race another great chance for training observation haki. and I keep Luffy so silent and I understand it does take some of the fun out to spoil stuff but knowledge is power and he shouldn't always be so quiet he could at least ready his crew that are gonna have battles for the island they are about to land on like in the drumm island chapters when Luffy told chopper to handle the one guy because he knew he could and that it would also help kinda push him. keeping it so close to the cannon is helpful for like storyboarding but if you stay to close it loses some creativity. I can't wait for the rewrite to come because I already love this one but do see where it could be improved, if you need a beta reader or just some help PM me I've helped a few authors with their stories when they were starting to get stuck or whatnot. anyways keep up the great work and update soon.
IMMORTALCRUSADE chapter 115 . 8/4/2020
The only thing that turned me off is that luffy lose to freaki'n crocodile the first time they fought even though his strength should be stronger than that because you freaki'n said that his strength is still the same as his strength before he travelled to the past so that is skeptical and those times that he fought other pirates too like arlong buggy and don krieg it seems like you only boosted his strength a little from his canon version from those arcs.
Son Namikaze Xeno chapter 115 . 8/2/2020
I LOVED this story and I await eagerly for the rewrite!
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