yo estoy esperando ansioso la re escritura pero siendo sinceros aunque no soy un experto tampoco yo no le encuentro nada malo a la primera versión que no sea la ocasional falta de ortografía aquí y allá pero de allí la historia me encanto y la disfrute, espero disfrutar de la re escritura cuando este terminada animo

Ignore all the flamers and keep writing while i liked the idea that you came up with just be a bit more orginal than the cannon stuff.

Lol, you do you. I don’t remember if I made a rude remark or if I didn’t, but good job on them haters lol.

Honestly, many people just up and leaves after the fifth chapter, but you persevered and had fun with it all.

I can wait for the rewrite, and have a nice day!

Happy to hear you're still working on it! Sucks that you've gotta deal with idiotic reviews. You're right, writing a story is harder than most people think and it should be fun for you too. Take your time and write the story for yourself, I'm just grateful to be able to tag along for the ride!

I love this story so much ️ You are so talented it’s unreal️ Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story️

All I can say to you sir is not to let those moronic retards get under your skin because if they do then they win. What do they win? This story never being told properly by yourself. Just do your best, that’s all us real fans ask for.

Don’t let them get to you your work is good and if you think it needs work then do it at your own pace and ignore the haters

You tell em! This for fun and for all to enjoy. Keep up the great work!

Ignore them. They are haters who are either most likely jealous of your impressive talent to make an AU version of One Piece that is absolutely hilarious, or just cannot stand people getting better reviews on their fanfiction stories than theirs and flame them in return. Your first version, while a little rough around the edges, was just so damn brilliant, I almost thought you were the original writer yourself, every now and then. If you want to rewrite the entire story, go right ahead, and I pray it just keeps getting better and better from here. Good luck with this and all other stories that I've read and enjoyed during my free time, like JDZ, Invader Zim: Breeding Hour, Five Night at Freddi's, One Punch Man: Hero's Harem, etc.

Sorry people are annoying you brosephi

Ignore the haters just keep going at your own pace, I like your writing and this rewrite sounds awesome.

Fuck those shit talkers

I love your stories and this rewrite sounds like a good idea. The people who are hating the story that's getting a rewrite can be quiet. This is your rewrite of a awesome series and I can wait to see this rewrite completed. Love your stories!

Not sure why people were saying it was bad, I enjoyed reading it.

i personally like it. i also find it kind of stupid that people are hating it for one reason or the other dude to the fact that there will always people looking for something that they personally like that is more often fond in fan-fiction then in original source.