Don’t worry about idiots like them. They are just idiots who can’t write jack. You write at your own pace. I can’t speak for everyone but I would rather you post something you are satisfied with rather than something that feels rushed. I also agree that you should do this because you that you want to do it and that you are having fun doing it. There is always room for improvement in everyone’s writing style. So don’t worry about the people putting down your writing. Just focus on the reviews for what you have done well and what you can do to improve.

Keep doing what you're doing. Don't worry about dumb people on the internet who don't know what they're talking about. You have one of the most popular one piece stories on the sight. Just ignore them.

Jealous meatheads are gonna try to get you down, but their words mean nothing. Never take criticism from someone who doesn't have a story of their own and certainly never from a guest who's too cowardly to say something with no way to rebuff. That's the same as someone throwing insults from behind a wall with a voice modulator. Their anonymity makes their opinions worthless.

I say all this who had a guest review three separate times to call my story trash even though it's essentially completed for the next many months. Some people just need to be assholes I guess. It makes them feel better about their sad, miserable lives.

will you be leaving this version up or will you be replacing the chapters with the rewrite?

I for one liked the original but hey that's me and like hell i know anything about this so ill leave it to your judgement hope to see the rewrite soon. BTW just ignore the Children that forgot what it means to be polite they don't know any better because they were spoiled as the children they were and wouldn't know hard work if it bit them in the ass. If you let them take your fun out of you, your just letting them win and having the satisfaction of spoiling your fun.

All I have to say after reading probably close to 1k books, haters going to hate, most likely because you put out something better than they could ever do and they're jealous, but this fic is easily on par with alot of the books that I have read, sure some grammar issues here and there, but professionals have teams of editors and proof readers to catch that stuff, these fics are where you can hone your style and find your stride. Dude this fic is already better than most of the anime. Keep going strong. For every 1 hater you have 100 fans. I read this fic when I was deployed across Africa and in Iraq, I have probably sat down to read and reread this fic in more countries than your haters have ever visited. Think of it this way, I can tell you that this fic has been read around the world on, 5 continents.

Well for what it’s worth I appreciate ur hard work which u do for ur own enjoyment of writing. the fact u post here doesn’t give anyone the right to be harsh and judgmental and just plain rude and ur not obligated to abide by any sort of schedule or demands. what u post is time u took out of ur day to share with us all for our entertainment for free I might add and I’m sorry that people can be a bit ungrateful to the fact that u don’t have to post at all but u do any way so thank u

Don't worry bro I like the first story and is looking forward in how much the story will improve in your rewrite

Man I have been reading this story since like chapter 5 got released I think, and I really enjoy it. While it wasn’t the best it was still enjoyable, and I am glad to hear that you are still looking to make this story better. However please ignore the trolls and haters you are doing fine without them and people look forward to your updates. The haters and trolls will always be there, so please ignore them for the rest of the fans.

Don’t let the bastards get you down. You’re a master of your craft and I’m prepared to wait for your excellent quality story. I can’t wait for the rewrite to get posted.

don't know why this Story gets hated on it was fine for me. actually better than most other fanfiction. sure it wasn't perfect, but if you want a perfect Story go read a book for that you actually pay for!
Fanfiction are FREE this included and he doesn't owe us anything, no Updates, no rewrites and not perfect grammer.
I for one LOVE this Story and was always Happy when a new chapter came out. F-ckthesystem if you enjoy writing Continue, if not, Stop.
But don't force yourself to write because you will end up hating your work and thats how truly terrible Storys come to be.

I wish you all the best on your rewrite, and that you don't let those who disrespect your passion ruin your creative vision.

I for one, truly enjoyed your story, and hope to see you continuing it soon.
Stay safe, and stay happy :)

You are great and amazing and dedicated and you’re worth it. Stay strong. The flamers can’t touch you.

All I ask is that you keep Nami, Robin, Nojiko and Hancock in the harem if you have any changes to the harem.

Listen, I don't know, if I was one of those people who were criticizing your writing, though knowing me, I surely have. Of I was one of those people, I really apologize. I am a very critic person and my criticism is always meant to be productive. I really and honestly just want to help writers on here improve, since I am an English teacher. And I understand that hurtful remarks and bashing is just stupid and hurtful, don't throw all critics into one basket, some of us really want to help you out. Know that you are writing a really cool story and some of us are still waiting patiently for you to finish your rewrite and update a new chapter to read it all in one sitting. So take your time and do your thing. It's part of the writing process and all those bullies, bathers, framers and general asshats can go and do you know what with their nastiest orifices. You're doing good! I wish you the best, man.