I completely forgot about Gin. Guess he's gonna join the crew this time around

Two people? Sanji and who else?

Man I love some of early One Piece inconsistency with the fragility of human beings. Kuina dies by falling Down D. Stairs and Kaya gets bedridden from losing her parents lol
Also Kuro's was probably the worst in the entire series lol

So Garp didn't notice Luffy has years of haki experience as well as a massive scar on his chest? And possibly other scars as well that he didn't have before?

Anyone who says chickens can’t fly has never had chickens. Smaller free range chickens fly exceptionally well.

Where do fanfic writers get this characterization of Sanji? He sure doesn’t have a preternatural ability to know when other men are getting some in the anime! And a pirate attacking his captain? Does he want to walk the plank?

Wow thsi a sotry is pretty shite. Please luk up fanfic author "Mr Grimjaw" for a fantstic sotry abou.t luv and adventures. It is much better then this garbage of a sotry.

Look up "Mr Grimjaw" for gud sotries.

I think this story is one of the vest I have ever read and would love to read more

just finished binge reading this story over the past two days and I enjoyed just about all of it. Seeing Luffy pick up new crewmates was exhilarating and the parts you did change were interesting. the parts you didn't change were a good refresher of the beggining of the story for those of us quite a bit farther along in the show. I look forward to the eventual rewrite and wish you luck.

Such nonsense Luffy didn't save Bon-chan again. By the time he got to Impel Down, Luffy's almost certainly gonna be known to be as strong as he is, so there's no plot need for Bon-chan to get locked up.

This is nonsense. Triple Haki Luffy would roflstomp Croco-boy any day of the week.

So Luffy's training against resisting seastone didn't come back to the past with him? Or is he faking it?

Luffy should have told Ace about Blackbeard's powers so Ace can face him better. Unless it's implied Luffy did?

Thanks for writing stories for us to read

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