one pick nit why why does sanji keep beating the ever living qauck out of luffy
he jelly of him or something

Little garden arc was awful.

I know I may have been late to this but I really enjoy this fan fiction of yours and idk about the others I like how it's close to canon. Keep up the good work and take your time. I await patiently for your work.
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Navarone was my favorite filler arc.

I just had a funny thought, what if the reason Enel wore a bandana on his head was to prevent his hair from standing up all the time because of the static.

I hoped that you'd have Johnny and Yosaku face plant into a tree like in George of The Jungle.

The running gag is funny, I just wish that Luffy would use Haki to defend himself at least once.

Lily, Muret, and Mani gave birth 9 months late, resulting IN 3-D's!

I hope Valentine thought that it was worth it, Luffy came inside without any protection and they about to ride the KNOCK UP stream. That stream is the biggest jinx someone could get if they were trying to avoid impregnation.

Mikita had better be careful.

When Blackbeard first appeared, I actually liked hearing him.

I see a lot of kinky shit happening in Vivi's future.

Meanwhile in a parallel universe, George Takei is saying "Oh my~"

For a moment I thought Luffy would bone Vivi because of the title.

I was hoping for a Jet Bazooka.
Iron Man 2
Rhodey: I've got something for this guy; I'm gonna bust his bunker with the Ex-Wife.
Tony: The what?
Rhodey fires it and makes a *tink* sound as it bounces off Ivan's armor and falls into the water before it makes a fart sound.
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Tony: Hammer Tech?
Rhodey: ...Yeah...