Reviews for Luffy's Renewed Adventure |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I tried thinking of what to say but all I could say is that this was some seriously crazy, marvelous shit that made this directly one of my favorites. You did an overly outstanding job, Author-kun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You could use this time since the marines can’t chase them to train them in haki and the 6 powers... Perfect time for a minor training montage |
![]() ![]() All I can say is I can't see a single reason why this would get hate I loved the story including all the sus. |
![]() ![]() I read the last chapter and you said you have lots of hate All I can say is that they are idiots. I'm loving this so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() me gusta el fanfic espero que puedas actualizar pronto . |
![]() ![]() Candy candy fruit is useless lmao |
![]() ![]() can't wait, I hope that it's just as good as this one, keep up the great work |
![]() ![]() This shit is garbage luffy get beat by crocodile even though he has gear 2 and haki and didn't luffy already beat crocodile the first time bro you following WAYYY TO MUCH INTO THE STORY BRO STOP NERFED LUFFY FOR FUCKS SAKE MAN HE HAS ALL GEARS PLUS HAKI AND STILL LOST TO MAN HE ALREADY THE FUCKING FIRST TIME AND WHO DOESN'T POSSES ANY FUCKING HAKI THE CRAP IS JUST FUCKING GARBAGE ANY NEWCOMER PLEASE DONT READ THIS SHIT ITS FUCKING RETARDED AND THE WRITER FUCKING RETARDED HES NEFRING THE SHIT OUT OF LUFFY |
![]() ![]() ![]() it ok bro. I know how the feeling about rude comment and that kind of stuff, just ignore them and be happy with what you write. Also can't wait to see the rewrited one |
![]() ![]() Can't wait for the rewrite I'm not done yet but I am enjoying it very much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely loved all the new crewmates you added and I hope to see them again in the rewrite. I can understand sticking close to canon out of comfort and I really enjoyed reading this story. There were some things that could have been better, but hey, that’s what the rewrite is for. Not gonna lie though, the Sanji kicking Luffy every time he has sex kinda got old pretty fast. Hope to read more of your work again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Personally, I'm not gonna be harsh or Disrespectful at all, I loved reading your version of One Piece and all that (2nd Favorite Anime show behind Pokemon). I was surprised by all the Characters you had added to Luffy's Crew (Gin, Johnny, Yosaku, Nojiko & Alvida). Shame that didn't happen on the Show. So I gotta say, really good stuff you wrote here. ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was pleasant but Im really indifferent with the whol Luffy X Harem thing but hey imma read it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now sanji feels like one of those retarded high school bulies... |
![]() ![]() To the assholes giving out harsh words to the author and the story shame on you guys and I hope you die in a ditch someone. Someone writes a story and all you know how to do is insult the dude if you could write one why haven't you...Tch pathetic assholes To author: ignore the fools I for one and many others enjoy this story hope we get an update |