Reviews for The Thoughts and Pain
Phoebe bug chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
you wort a really good story
psalm57 chapter 7 . 6/24/2004
Wow! I really enjoyed that. Are you going to write anymore on it. I know you posted this quite awhile ago. But I would still love to read more.
psalm57 chapter 4 . 6/24/2004
I like the twist. It is so sad. Mark can't die. I don't really see Dr. Jackson not learning about the problem for three months though.
psalm57 chapter 2 . 6/24/2004
Again, I like that the facts are right on the mark. ALL is the most commonly seen from of the disease in children. FYI: it is chemotherapy, there is no H in the word.
psalm57 chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
I definitley like this idea and I'm going to keep reading. I also how you are using actual symptoms. It is right on so far medically.
Bearfreakedbeth chapter 7 . 12/29/2002
Hi, this is good! It is sad to see Marc sick and I hope he will be okay. Keep writing, you guys are doing great!
I feel bad for Marc chapter 5 . 11/11/2002
Poor Marc and I feel bad for Lu 2 I hope he doesnt' die...please udate asap
fanatic.freak chapter 1 . 10/21/2002
OMG OMG OMG! Wanna know more! Poor Marc...

xxx Charlie
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2002
PLEASE WRITE MORE!
Jaein chapter 1 . 10/20/2002
ohh! this is good. Hurry up and write more!
Tinker Bell 05 chapter 1 . 10/20/2002
YOU GOTTA LEAVE ME WITH THE CLIFFHANGER.. KEEP WRITING AWESOME JOB