Reviews for The Triumph of These Tired Eyes
Aedwards179 chapter 11 . 6/7
why doesn't he go to bones with his memories about her using the blood quill? release it to the prophet or some shit. don't take it to the government.
Aedwards179 chapter 6 . 6/7
I really hope this Loki won't attack NY.
Aedwards179 chapter 1 . 6/7
shouldn't he be Haraldr Lokison? that's how they name kids. with that last name not whatever Loki just made up.
violettelarawilliams chapter 1 . 5/15
hp lover 2013 I saw ur comment and am now hesitant to read the story
darthkratos24 chapter 14 . 5/12
This story started grit and all the way up to the goblet of fire it's fine. But after that? It's like you can't remember what you've given harry and then have to dumb him down for your retarded enemies to be a "threat" to him. One minute he's talking about his Asgardian strength accidentally pulling nobs off in the shower. the next minute he's a bumbling fool stuck with rope as he just sits there watching because... Reasons! You're story is all over you only do something when it's convenient to you but then instantly forgot it happened the next chapter and someone who was raised by LOKI! your harry is far to noble and don't go "Loki is noble in the show" yea I'm the Loki show he is...but this is set with a Loki that doesn't mind setting his brother up for the fall a Loki that will happily let the frost giants onto Asgard because he can a LOKI that lets an alien invasion happen so he's plan to take the Asgardian thrown isn't threatened... I don't know about you but if I was raised by that Loki I really wouldn't give a fuck what people thought about me and have killed several people by now just to get them out of the way... This is so far just canon but instead of a reason that Harry's stood there scared your harry just stands there like a gormless sod. Bella just killed Sirius he almost killed her but is stopped and as she's sat there helpless instead of blasting the head off of one of Tom's top supporters harry sits there looking at the pretty lights... Simply because you didn't want him doing nothing and couldn't be arsed writing a reason why he just SAT THERE
darthkratos24 chapter 13 . 5/12
God's the start of this chapter was just sloppy and hard to read... I honestly gave up. The story is normal fine great even but either you lost steam or couldn't think of another way to get him to that fucking ball. Honestly just ignoring it for a little longer would of been better then this crap no offense but... Yea this part so far your worst
BLWebtoonweeb chapter 33 . 5/2
...you've mad me cry three times and thank you this was a grat book I loved the drama I haven't cryed because of a book or fanfiction in like 2-3 years and surprisingly you made me crack congrats!
hp lover 2103 chapter 20 . 4/17
WHY? Why did u just kill Draco! AFJHGX ARGHHHH
Kal chapter 1 . 4/1
Ooo this is certainly an interesting AU.
orthankg1 chapter 33 . 3/29
Very nice
kadayao chapter 33 . 3/23
you had me sobbing
HarryPfanfic chapter 33 . 3/18
I love the story but the last 2 chapters are just too much!
It's not that I don't like the plot but the way things change rapidly during the last 2 chapters..i hate it

Spoilers

Ok so he can destroy his homeland..his family and yet could not gain his body from hocrux..but after 3 days when Loki looks him in the eye..he is able to defeat hocrux?
And what is wrong with frigga and Odin..you downplayed the Alot! Frigga was raised by witches and was more powerful than even loki..yet she is struggling with these simple things..and Odin has almost no power except banging his gungnir..
I couldn't understand hela's form..yeah she was death but what was she? Didn't she miss loki? What is it that she does in Valhalla? You didn't explain hela very well

Overall a decent story and some plots are really good..especially the hogwarts' war, umbridge beating and aether sequence (until you messed it up) but don't expect for extraordinary
Sofiya chapter 33 . 2/28
Шикарно))))))
Sofiya chapter 20 . 2/27
Дракошу жалко((((((((( Я бы хотела чтобы он выжил
Sofiya chapter 16 . 2/27
Я думаю, Гарри является смертным на данный момент из-за крестража, который перекрывает многие его возможности, а так же и бессмертие.
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