Reviews for Lost in a Game
AI-Omicron chapter 5 . 7/4/2014
You shouldn't talk that way about yourself and your writing.
I think your better than most people even my stories suck but I want to improve them but for now I can't do so cause I'm in a hospital that doesn't allow computers.
A writer is a writer as long as you keep improving and lengthening you vocabulary.
Plus I like this story you just need a little more surrounding detail.
Meta-out
NowForSometinEntirelyDifferent chapter 4 . 6/22/2014
Love the story and I want you to know that it was all amazing so please continue. Thanks
KyoKaraMaohGirl chapter 4 . 6/5/2014
OmgomgomgomgomgOMG!
This is so cute/hot/idk
However...
*Grabs the Engineer from thin air and glomps him*
Stay away from Engie!
*Hissssssssssssss*
Guest chapter 4 . 5/24/2014
TOTAL BULLSHIT
Yakyi-dono chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
Can't wait this story is getting interesting
DaGibzz chapter 3 . 4/24/2014
Ooooh shit man that's awesome. Your pretty good at this :D
Guest chapter 3 . 4/12/2014
WHENS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
MidnightDragon0213 chapter 2 . 4/8/2014
please write more!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
Interesting. I look for more