Dealing and forgiving and moving on are hard. I can absolutely see how, moving away and sort of moving on, she could fail to really move on; to move on from the hurt, without realising it.

Oh, first giggles are so wonderful.

Okay, so I’m reading this one now. I often don’t review an old story like this till I’m sure I’ll keep reading. And you comments at the beginning about pacing etc being determined by the word prompts made me doubt. But I’m sucked in now.
I have to read just in short bursts though, because you’re writing is so gut wrenching. I mean, nothings really happened that’s gut wrenching yet, but we know she got her heart broken as a teen, we know she’s never gotten over it, we can surmise he probably cheated on her with Rosalie or something along those lines... and probably that he’s also never gotten over it.
But the way you write is so evocative it’s hard to read but impossible not to.

Excellent!

I get what Emmett is saying, but to a girl with abandonment and self steem issues, and then what Edward did, and with Rosalie of all people, must of been devastating to her.

I've read this story many times and your words still wreck me. Every time. I hope your still writing..because ever word is beautiful.

Wow, you're good with Angst. But thing is, my chest still feels tight. I mean, I loved it and the ending makes sense but... I don't know. It feels a bit anticlimatic. I feel like I need an epilogue or something, it 's too complicated to just stay like this.

Anyway, amazing job! I loved it, though I'm still suffering because this was hard with all the letters.

I'm glad they found the way to each other, but it's sad that they had to suffer so much, when they loved each other so fully. I especially loved the first day of his senior year picture, and him realizing the way she looked at him.

Thank you for writing this.

Wow that is really a great story. Well told and I loved the form it was written in. Thank you for sharing your talents with us again.

I hope one day you can add to this beautiful story. My problem is that the person that help break them apart got a destination wedding with the person she loved. There was no apology or remorse (as far as I understood). While yes, we can imagine what could have happen, I would love to read it coming from you. Because honestly I’m not very creative. Thank you for a wonderful story.

I was up until 2:30am last night reading this.. I think I read it before but couldn't remember finishing it. Anyway, my eyes are a puffy mess.

I'm so impressed you were about to write such a intricate, cohesive story from witfit prompts. Though you've yet again made me left wanting more. I finished So far from home and had the same feeling. I would love a glimpse at the future of any off your stories..

This has been on my TBR list for years and I’m so glad I finally took the plunge. I love how everything came full-circle, how they developed and rediscovered each other. I loved how real it was, flaws and all. I love your words and how you string them together. Thanks for sharing them.
-Gigi xo

I would be willing to trade my first born for a few outtakes of these two. He’s the good one. Always does his homework, cleans his room and does a really good job at doing dishes. I kid, I kid. Maybe. This story and reunion is so wonderful but I’m aching for their first time. Maybe an Alice/Jasper wedding future shot? Your words kill me every time, even on rereads.

“The boy I loved became a man, and I missed it.” I love this line.

Blanket fort kisses are swoony.

Rereading through your stories because your words bring me joy. You have the best characters out there. I wish I could buy your words and put them on my bookshelf. Maybe someday.