Wow. Loved it!

Oh wow, i loved this so so much even though i wanted to kill this edward many times, and this is the very best alice i have ever read, and this was high on my wimpy angst scale! thanks for writing!

Ouch...carlisle stalk hurts!

This was hard to read!

OMG this made me cry and I love this Alice so much. i can FEEL bella's pain...

Oh bella, what did he do to make you so hard to him?

He is so charming. Bless her broken heart!

Wow!

blah blah...but hes gonna end up dating Kelly anyway...blah blah.

Do we really need to rehash all of Edwards old fuck holes? I think not.

Edward says that a week went by before he fucked rose but bella said it was three days. But either way, Edward goes on and on about how hes SOOOO TIRED of feeling this way...and just for a moment he wants to forget...um really? your soooooo tired? its been fucking days! THATS IT, DAYS!

And only five shots and hes so shit faced that he has sex with some hoe? Edwards a piece of shit, point blank.

why not just forgive him...but not be friends? I REALLY feel like she shouldn't be his friend.

I don't really see the point of this story anymore. Its all about what forgiving Edward? Why? Hes a piece of shit. He crossed a line that he cant uncross, I don't think Bella should EVER give him the time of day again!

And Rosalie...what a fucking skank. Not only does she do parties but she also does brothers!

This story had me balling my eyes out, the only thin I hate in about this story is Rosalie. How did she get absolved of everything she did? He warribleto Bbea hero hour high school and sexually assaulth Edward the first time, and she gets away with it!

And the whole family is on her side! Hell Emmett stupidly married her! I just wish you made an outtake where karma kicks the crap out Rosalie. Where she ends up divorced, disfigured and working as a prostitute.

I think choosing to end here was really artistic and beautiful, but oml I wish there was more! Thank you for writing this beautiful story.

As I said this was the second reading and my thoughts haven't changed at all. I think you did a great job making the reader feel for both characters and their special love and how they grew from the pain of finding out that love hurts but can be repaired.
I love how Edward waited for her this time. He grew into that patient man she needed him to be.I loved this story the first time around and reading it again was the same. I still feel like I want to know more, which shows just how invested I was in these two and their journey back together. How strong they were to give it a try and see if their special childhood and coming of age love could help heal a horrible hurt and I think it did. I wanted more though. I wanted an epi, some future take for these two. Maybe you'll still write one, someday?
As always, I appreciate you sharing your work.