|Reviews for A Scottish Tale|
| jk chapter 8 . 7/5
Edward was a complete fucking asshole in chapter 8 and I'm disgusted that bella was the one to say sorry.
Edward can go fuck himself
| jk chapter 3 . 7/5
funny how just days ago Edward couldn't remember the last time he had a woman in his bed...except he remembers perfectly that it was a whore named Mallory, that shes a maid, that she has red hair and green eyes, that she tried to get him to cum inside her in hopes that she would become pregnant...hmmm thought he couldn't remember? and Edward isn't above a "willing woman"? soooooo ANY willing woman? old, fat, ugly, scarred, crazy,whores? gross
| jk chapter 2 . 7/5
I find it odd that a laird in that day has a "best grin" like hes some slick city boy out dropping panties. stuuuupid.
also that whole bit about him liking it when the women he beds "sneak" out on him...? I REALLY fucking doubt any of his whores are SNEAKING out of the fucking LAIRDS bed in the middle of the night... this isn't some one night stands were talking about here...in that day woman didn't just go around fucking whoever and sneaking away in the morning before he wakes
| jk chapter 1 . 7/5
you really blew through that first chapter...
bella was in such bad shape from only ONE lash of a whip?
I thought a whipping was due if you were caught stealing, does that really only apply to men? or just men and common folk?
it took esme HOURS to clean ONE lash...that was mostly just a welt?
bella SCREAMED bloody murder because esme poured alcohol over a WELT?
she succumbed to fever after only a couple hours?
Edward went into the room and bella say it was him and quicky grabbed a knife and held it to Edwards throat...but she couldn't even rise out of bed? how did she reach Edwards throat from the bed?
I really just don't see someone just being out of it FOR DAYS from ONE CLEANED whip lash...its just not fucking believable...all you need to do to fix most of this is have Edward whip her for real...cause really he shouldn't have stopped in the first place since a whipping is the penalty for theft...you had him stop just cause he is a she? How do female thieves get punished then? hmmmmm?
I was thinking that Edward would have just went to town on her with the whip since he saw "him" and all of sudden might be gay...just saying
| jk chapter 3 . 6/21
I don't think I could kiss a guy after I say him with a whore...no thanks
| jk chapter 1 . 6/21
hes never touched a woman except to give her pleasure? gross..Edwards a whore
and all this fuss over one slash? seriously?
I think this story would have been better if he had whipped her like he was gonna when he thought she was a boy...then there would be "REAL" concern...this whole thing feels forced
| marinerecon97 chapter 2 . 12/26/2015
never thought i would like anything twilight
| Sunshine1220 chapter 8 . 12/7/2015
Would love to read more!
| covenmama chapter 8 . 8/21/2015
Will you be continuing this? I just found it, and enjoyed reading the first 8 chapters!
| Moltz chapter 8 . 7/29/2015
Is this story on hiatus?
Your fans are patiently waiting for your inspired words to wrap up this tension between Laird Edward and his new bride.
| quinzy chapter 8 . 7/15/2015
Lovely story! I don't know if you'll finish this but I have strong hope you will someday... Writer's block or RL must have been the reason we're not having an update but I'm hoping you'll be back to updating this story again :)
| dazzleglo chapter 8 . 5/27/2015
She hasn't experienced a real family or castle life really.
| dazzleglo chapter 6 . 5/27/2015
Lol she has questions about madame's.
| dazzleglo chapter 5 . 5/27/2015
Lol poor shocked Edward and his mom suggested it too.
| dazzleglo chapter 4 . 5/27/2015
Yay the wolf is gone.