Reviews for Caught in the Crossfire
swanfrost chapter 3 . 6/9/2014
man, that first section with Erwin was really creepy- but I feel like it brought out a lot of his mysterious personality. and i feel there's some foreshadowing in there too...maybe that's just me.

Who are the twins? Hmmm...and that entire thing about monsters...

Can't wait for the next!
babo123 chapter 3 . 5/31/2014
Those twins were freaky, what the hell?
babo123 chapter 2 . 5/31/2014
I like it when Eren refers to Levi as "Corporal" when he's a kid and "Heichou" when he's older. I am weird like that, so this "Corporal business is making me squeal cause it's coming from a 7 year old Eren :3
babo123 chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
Ahh yes this prologue is much better cause now I know how old Levi is, and only an eight year difference to the initial 'he must be at least 24 for a policeman' hehe.
XxHummingBirdxX chapter 3 . 5/30/2014
Eh? What was that about? This is interesting. I hope you update this soon it's good and I want ti know what those girls were up to. Besides... Eren never told them his name so... what's up with that? Gosh I am so anxious
Guest chapter 3 . 5/24/2014
update please...
Pas d'Autres chapter 3 . 5/21/2014
I read in your old version that this story is meant to "fuck us up", which I really didnt want to experience. But I still took the bait and I was hooked since the prologue. Eren is too cute, Levi is already attached (even if he denies), and these twins are too creepy but I don't know whether to see them as bad guys or not...such a coin concept but your writing is amazing and I do hope you update soon () And Anime North! You're going?! Geez, do you know which tumblr artist is attending? I'd really like to meet them in person. Thank you so much for your writing!
bat-tron chapter 3 . 5/9/2014
Oh, Eren. You're such a little cutie!
Take your time with updating, dear. Because this chapter was super awesome, even if it was a filler!
Cascade00 chapter 3 . 5/9/2014
Eren such a cute lil darling hopefully Levi can protect him!
swanfrost chapter 2 . 5/3/2014
I think this chapter was pretty well written, although the plot hasn't really started to kick in yet. however, little eren is always really cute and yeah

can't wait for the next!
swanfrost chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
This is really really insanely cute and a helluva lot better than the first version.
YukiYuna chapter 2 . 4/29/2014
Wahh so sweet *-*
wana read more!

hope u update soon

greets yuki ;D
Pikas chapter 2 . 4/8/2014
A fire that's more than a third degree burn? Do we even need to place our bets on who might be behind that?

LOL it's the scene with the microscopically dirty blazer that gets tossed in the basket.

This chapter is like a classic; I've probably read it like, 4 times. I think it's because of cheeky Eren. Asdfghjkl. Levi's soft spot is becoming obvious.

Patiently waiting for the next chapter!
Keep the good work up!
Pikas chapter 1 . 4/8/2014

Glad that I've been able to read the new version.
The prologue seems interesting.
Kid!Eren is so cute omg!

I don't know why, but after reading about tge neighbours, I'm (already!) suspecting the video gamer adult person. Or am I over analysing?

P.S. Levi's humour smh.
AddictedToMxM chapter 2 . 4/3/2014
This was so cute! :3 I've been reading this since you posted the first chap of the old version and I'm really excited you are updating again c:
But don't be so hard with yourself, you don't have to rewrite everything! You're doing great! :'DD
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