Reviews for Perfect
chameleah86 chapter 1 . 2/24/2015
Best first time ever story. Realistic. I like the fact they had to try a second time. And voila! Success! So sweet and wonderful!
Evil.Inc chapter 1 . 1/13/2015
This was such a sweet story, their innocence made it even sweeter. Loved this!
Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
Very sweet :-)
RobLover21 chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
Loved it wish there would have been a little more about their future if they lasted or what happened later... Great story over all!
puasluoma chapter 1 . 4/1/2014
eliza41 chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
Loveddddd this story. It was perfect.
Kate1386 chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
I always enjoy your writing and this was no diffrent... Sweet cute perfect...
dpennell007 chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
Very nice. I didn't follow that contest, but I'm glad I follow you so I got to read your story.
TrulyOutrageous chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
Love it! This is so sweet.
Princess Mishawaka chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
I love it. Kind of makes me remember a time when I was just beginning to find out about the joys of true love.
I have to wonder what happens next. Will you expand it?
You are a very good writer and I can see how you do well in contests. Please continue to write and I will continue to read.
jansails chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
Gosh, I wish I had had that kind of first time experience with a boy who returned my affections as Edward did Bella's.
They were so sweet with one another, & how nice was it to learn Edward was only a bit more experienced than Bella after all.
Leibeezer chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
I Loved it!
lellabeth chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
This was so lovely. A very sweet story, but still genuine and relatable. It made me giggle and swoon and want to read all the HS stories. Well done!