Reviews for Master of the Force: Book 1
Kinjo2k01 chapter 8 . 2/4
really liked this story.. I am sad to see it on hold..
Hell No chapter 6 . 12/18/2022
I really liked this story, its well written and thought out. But then you just had to go and ruin it by making a mother and son fuck. I dont care that he's adopted, its still a parent with a minor. You, author, need some goddamn therapy!
Darkestcalling chapter 6 . 11/30/2022
I'm just going to point out that the amount of gold was unrealistic it would need to be in tons not kilograms especially to be able to pull all liquid assets of a galaxy wide spice cartel even then I doubt gold is is the most valuable metal not positive but for simplicity it's fine

also wish harry was more grey the pure white
Callum Runchman chapter 8 . 5/7/2022
Ik you claimed you've not abandoned any of your stories but is it safe to say after 6 years that your not coming back?
I'll admit I'm quite disappointed as I was really enjoying this OP force wielding Harry along with the more mature content and themes being suggested. Just a big waste of potential in the end
Guest chapter 6 . 1/19/2022
Pointless chapter that affected the plot not at all.
Shortmike24 chapter 6 . 1/13/2022
you are a creep. plan and simple.
KingCheetah19 chapter 8 . 1/7/2022
Harry is way way too OP, but I guess that's why I love this story. it sucks that it is abandoned because I was curious how you would have scaled Palpatine and the other villains to the level of competing with Harry on a even footing.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/15/2021
let kenobi be cut in half
Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2021
hahaha you put description of all the force abilities that you have mentioned, and i was searching the wiki xD lol
Eragon13247 chapter 7 . 11/21/2021
please update
Milagro626 chapter 8 . 11/3/2021
Great story. Very interesting, and hoping that you will continue this and some of your other fics. If you need a beta then please let me know.

You are a very good story teller, and you have a great way of describing the story arcs in great detail Loved the part about "Darth Knight".

AstralGemini chapter 8 . 7/14/2021
hope to see all your storys continue
Signal Lost chapter 8 . 6/15/2021
This has been a great read so far, but due to the lack of semi-recent updates I would like to inquire as to whether or not this story has been abandoned. If it is, I would be interested in working it.
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