Reviews for The Fall of Menzobarranzan
Guest chapter 3 . 3/2/2015
as soon as you can my ass you haven't posted for quite awhile although it is a good story
tinkertat15 chapter 3 . 7/28/2014
I think it was great and I think I could help you figure out some things for chapter four. You could tell how the story gose by explaining the way their victory went when they took down Menzobarrenzan .
tinkertat15 chapter 2 . 7/28/2014
Honestly I think your writing is just fine but then again I'm not a good writter myself but I'm enjoying your story so far. It's very introresting. Thank You for the good story so far. :-) 3
tinkertat15 chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
I liked the chapter a lot and I think there is nothing wroung with the chapter.
ilkar chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
action packed beginning. I'm glad there's drizzt. I'm a Huge fan of elves, never get tired of reading any material abt them :D this nickname is also the name of a mage
And im a writer here too Reinamarie seregon. Would u like to read?
Guest chapter 2 . 4/3/2014
Very nice
Pls dont stop
Ezio Auditore 58 chapter 2 . 3/31/2014
Wow so far this is great love it your doing great with the story can't wait to see what happens next. Love the story