|Reviews for Nice Guys Finish Dead Last|
| inuyashamunkey chapter 19 . 8/17
WHAT DA HELL WHY IT OVER SO QUICK? NO EPILOGUE?
| phonyscreenager chapter 19 . 7/26
i was waiting for Kakashi to make his appearance and tadaaaah there he is xD
| phonyscreenager chapter 3 . 7/24
OH GOD HE CAME TO NARUTO'S NAME OMGOMGOMG I CAN'T
| Kbeauty120 chapter 19 . 7/21
there are no. words. to describe how much I loved this story! I read this while crazy, wonderful rollercoaster of a story in a day! that's how good this fix was! I laughed and cried and was angry and frustrated at the idiots for all the misunderstandings throughout the story, with my family looking at me strangly and like I was crazy! but I don't care! it was a fantastic story and I more than loves it! sorry for my rant! keep up the great work! it's seriously stories like yours that inspire me to write my I am fics! one day I hope I can reach your level of awesomeness!
| Kaylur876 chapter 19 . 7/17
All I can say is that you are absolutely AWESOME! I have been reading fanfics for like 5 years. This is my first time reviewing anything, I followed this first from the first time you posted it to its conclusion... After two years I randomly decided to reread it and it absolutely took my breath away, the plot was well thought out and executed, I had no problems following your train of thoughts and you captured me all over again from the begining to the end. There was never a dull moment ! Hope life is treating you well and your following your passion!
| Gwenniarose chapter 19 . 5/29
great great great ending! I love Itachi so much "it had only taken the universe eight years to prove him right" haha that is perfect! I loved it!
| Imtopaz1988 chapter 19 . 3/25
I LOVED THE fic wish saskue had said I love and maybe someone proposed but you could always continue later with some flashbacks of it and all that stuff maybe they have kids and stuff. I will tell you some of the chapters scared me thinking it was a naru or sas died in it. Thank god u didn't do that hate those. Anyway thanks again love it hope ull continue it sometime
| BlackProdigy chapter 19 . 3/20
Thanks for not making Nagato some retarded assed psycho freak. FYI I read the Archive version because I wanted to get all the smex. It was awesome.
| BlackProdigy chapter 6 . 3/19
Mischievous Naru. FYI Sasuke is chewing bullets. .
| BlackProdigy chapter 5 . 3/19
So, like they say in my country , di story cum to bump. (aka, the truth is revealed). Sasuke you freakin moron. Smh.
| BlackProdigy chapter 1 . 3/19
Can't believe that I didn't review this. Sasuke. You. Are. So. Damn. Petty. Smh.
| ShadeWarrior chapter 19 . 3/15
Oh my god this was so beautifully written and so fantastic and I loved it! Keep up the brilliant work!
| missurreal chapter 19 . 2/6
i know i'm very late with this, but that's the beauty of the internet isn't it? i'm glad i stumbled over your story. and maybe it's just because i'm so emotionally invested and the feels are fresh, but your story touched me to the point that i created an account on this website, just to give you a review. i've been reading fics on here silently for years. but it's your story, and also your author's notes ;) which have pushed me to feel that i need to tell you, how beautiful your writing is. and i can't believe how talented a writer you are. quickly writing down a great chapter while in the subway? there are only a few fics out of the hundreds that i've read, which present me with this depth of emotions and which can pull me in so hard, that i'll stay up until 7am reading, reading in the car, etc. and just.. the well deserved development of this particular story, the angst was painful, the chapter where sasuke sees the video? painful. naruto's birthday desaster? painful. but i trusted that you'd make up for it. and sure enough, i guess the deeper the pain the higher the bliss? and it's always great to see how parts of the canon get worked into fanfics. like the fact that sasuke likes vegetables, kakashi loving the ero sennin's porn novels, etc. all these little things, which make you feel warm and connected to it all, as a reader. ah i'm blabbing now ain't i? but there are things i feel i needed to tell you, to reassure you, to make you know how appreciated your writing is. even years later. there will always be silent readers who loved your story. i'm kind of sorry i wasn't there to give reviews while you wrote it, but i also know that there is something extremely intense and allconsuming about reading 19chapters in two days, i don't think i would have survived the cliffhangers hah.. thank you for all the times i had to stop reading, because my chest hurt and my heart tightened. thank you for the beauty of this intimate, so well deserved, slow-burn, absolute writing of their relationship. i'm such a sucker for naruto pining over sasuke and just in general, naruto appreciating, enjoying, loving sasu. you gave that and more, because your pov's were well balanced and so, so good. and i'm so happy you made them get together and actually STAY together for a large part of the story. i feel very unsatisfied when stories end after a get-together moment, after having me suffer loads of angst and misunderstandings and longing for closure and whatnot. also a big thank you for not breaking them up in the last nagato arc. you were so right in your notes, they wouldn't do it. i will save this story, treasure it, because i will probably come back to read it again one day. last but not least, i loved your itachi.
sending you lots and lots of love from switzerland, xx
| Plappermuul chapter 1 . 1/19
As usual the better version is ao3. ;-) I'm relativelly new on ff. Could you tell me what the problem os with this page and the other versions? Was that always this way?
| Kisaki Sakura chapter 19 . 1/3
I really do love the last sentence.
A good story, with a few cliches in an alternate setting that doesn't make them annoying but sweet.
Good job, your writing was again utterly beautiful to read.