Reviews for The Transfer
534667lc chapter 18 . 14h ago
Love your story now following! . Please update soon!
Twistedfangirl chapter 18 . 3/6
I like this fic. It definitely deserves all the favourites its got. Can't wait for the next update!
Jessenia22 chapter 18 . 2/28
Love the plot and the character, Liss. Hope you plan to continue the story.
KJAC001 chapter 18 . 2/23
Wish you would finish. I would love to find out what happens next.
ToshimiOkami chapter 18 . 2/21
So awesome! Hope there will be more soon! XD
IsYourH3artTaken chapter 18 . 2/12
This is absolutely fantastic. I was hoping I'd find a Eric/OC story that's solely based on his book persona and I couldn't find a single one until I discovered yours. Oh, man, I'm so glad I did. You write Eric so perfectly it's like I'm actually reading omitted scenes Veronica Roth penned. He's still cold and cruel, but his feelings for Liss are crystal clear. I don't think there's anything he wouldn't do to keep her safe (like murder ahh). And considering what happens in Insurgent, I'm so paranoid about what's in store for them. If you're gonna break my heart, please do it gently, haha. :D

Also, I think you did a very good job at establishing the Four/Liss kinship. Liss is a great OC and I love the fact that she's her own person and doesn't let her relation as another Eaton weigh her character down. Sometimes making OCs as siblings to the canon characters is trickly, but you've done it beautifully. They don't act too fluffy as brother and sister, yet they don't constantly fight either. It's a very much flawed relationship, but still realistic and amazing to see grow.

Wow, okay, I think I babbled on long enough. I can't wait to see how Eric and Liss' relationship plays out! :)
Guest chapter 18 . 2/2
Love the story please write more.
Loki'sLittleEnchantress chapter 18 . 1/10
I really like this story! It is well written and I love Liss' character. Her relationship with Eric is amazing- I love it! I hope you find time to update soon; I can't wait
XxXLIFEafterDEATHXxX chapter 18 . 11/27/2014
I'm really curious how the first installment of this series is going to end! I can't wait to read more!
Sarcasmes chapter 18 . 11/9/2014
Hello!
Juste to say that i really like your story!
it was all i wanted: tobias with a sister who's falling in love with Eric.
I hope you continue this story soon, it's really good!
(I'm french, so, sorry for the writing mistakes, hope i'm understandable!)
LokiLover5 chapter 18 . 11/6/2014
Oh my gosh this story is so good! Please update soon I cannot wait to read more!
tarapx815 chapter 18 . 11/1/2014
I know it's been a while but... PLEASE UPDATE!
I beg you.
Tanni-chan chapter 18 . 10/26/2014
This is lovely! I have looked so many places for a Eric/OC fic, and as is to be be expected, they're hard to find. I hope you update soon because this is really good:)
LetsBeAliveAndStuff chapter 8 . 10/25/2014
Every girl is equipped with this skill, darlin': kneeing a guy where the sun doesn't shine. So if Eric in on top of Liss (ew. that sounds wrong.) she can raise her knee and give his family jewels some pain. Eric would probably double over, or at least loosen his grip…

Luv ya.

LetsBeAliveAndStuff
spb chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
hey i just started reading and it is fabulous! just wanted to add though that when you say she "unconsciously" straightened her back it is a little confusing, i'd suggest using subconscious instead! keep up the great work!
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