|Reviews for A twisted fate|
| Cylon One chapter 1 . 10/20/2020
I certainly like it and would love to read more.
I can only hope that it's possible someday soon.
| evolution-500 chapter 1 . 8/26/2020
I think it's a good start. One punctuation error. So, reading this, I can't help feeling like I'm reading an ending cutscene rather than an actual story. You have a promising beginning at the start, but then you abruptly shift to the end of the tournament. I think it could have used more build-up and would be interested in seeing Jaune's progress during the tournament itself. Overall, though, it is a good start.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2016
So I like this I can't give writing advice so I'm useless but I like it
| deathleader chapter 1 . 6/1/2016
I say contune with this one... I would love to see what his reaction would be to the RWBY World...
| codybob chapter 1 . 3/10/2016
this could be good it shal be watched!